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Chapter 33.2 - Against the Glass

Lynea, your book is quite well written, albeit difficult to keep track of which chapter I'm on, and a little difficult to engage in, but that's just because I'm more used to paper books than Ebooks. I also think you could do with a bit more description...we have no idea what some of the characters even look like! Otherwise, I think the plot is good, and you are definitely good at constructing a narrative. But please, PLEASE, put in more description.