Earthright
Acolyte
Hello, I was hoping to get a few other opinions about a world that incorporated both a "futuristic" and "primitive" civilization among the races. There was going to be 6 races in my world, each having their own unique advantages for battle. There are the Humans, Dwarves, High Elves, and Dark Elves allied with each other. Then there will be the Orcs and Netherian allied together.
I won't give away what the story is about, but basically there was a great war between the races. The Human civilization was considered the most powerful and used most of the worlds resources to produce things like hover bikes, forcefields, and weaponry like modern guns.
The High Elves were the second most powerful and used magic. They never bothered with the technology that the humans used. Instead they lived in an enormous city along with the Dark Elves in an ancient tree that provided the High Elves with the use of their magic abilities.
The Orcs in my story will be enormous to make up for the fact that they use primitive armor and weaponry. They aren't very smart, and are being used by the Netherian. The Netherian are few in numbers, but like humans have modern technology, which they arm the orcs with.
The main Human stronghold, Grand Rosenguard, will be attacked by the Netherian and the Orcs. The High Elves turn on the Humans and help the Nethrian and Orcs attack city. The leader of the city told a few survivors a code that they must use in the future when they return to open a secret section of the city. The survivors escaped to the sewers and established a new underground base with very few people alive.
During the siege on Grand Rosenguard, the Dark Elves were exiled from the tree, and alot had been killed while fleeing from the High Elves. The Dwarves, on a frozen continent in the north now stand alone between the High Elves, Netherian, and Orcs. However, the Dark Elves and Humans meet and plot to take back the city and strike at the heart of the Netherian, Malmortus.
While that's all happening there's also the main story line, but I wanted peoples opinions if it would make sense to have both a Futuristic and Primitive feel to the story after they heard a little of what it's about.
I won't give away what the story is about, but basically there was a great war between the races. The Human civilization was considered the most powerful and used most of the worlds resources to produce things like hover bikes, forcefields, and weaponry like modern guns.
The High Elves were the second most powerful and used magic. They never bothered with the technology that the humans used. Instead they lived in an enormous city along with the Dark Elves in an ancient tree that provided the High Elves with the use of their magic abilities.
The Orcs in my story will be enormous to make up for the fact that they use primitive armor and weaponry. They aren't very smart, and are being used by the Netherian. The Netherian are few in numbers, but like humans have modern technology, which they arm the orcs with.
The main Human stronghold, Grand Rosenguard, will be attacked by the Netherian and the Orcs. The High Elves turn on the Humans and help the Nethrian and Orcs attack city. The leader of the city told a few survivors a code that they must use in the future when they return to open a secret section of the city. The survivors escaped to the sewers and established a new underground base with very few people alive.
During the siege on Grand Rosenguard, the Dark Elves were exiled from the tree, and alot had been killed while fleeing from the High Elves. The Dwarves, on a frozen continent in the north now stand alone between the High Elves, Netherian, and Orcs. However, the Dark Elves and Humans meet and plot to take back the city and strike at the heart of the Netherian, Malmortus.
While that's all happening there's also the main story line, but I wanted peoples opinions if it would make sense to have both a Futuristic and Primitive feel to the story after they heard a little of what it's about.