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I guess to me, when I was writing this OP, I thought about all the ways I could increase the stakes and tension (largely at Helio's prompting). The girl was almost nonexistent in the first draft. She was present but not in immediate peril, simply existing as a ward. But Helio told me to make that situation have more drama, and I have, and I love it. I certainly feel the situation is worse than my original idea, and since the girl and the MC are soon parted, it wouldn't make sense for me to involve her in too much more of the plot, but because of what I've established in this rewrite, as far as their new connection and the MC's new level of protectiveness, the resulting changes will then later make things worse, as well. The girl will be a factor in the ensuing journey, now, too.
I've done several levels of making things worse, but rather than destroy everything and uproot a larger scale of the world than I originally planned, I just took my original ideas and gave them more gravity.
Is there another term for what I'm doing? I'm increasing tension and connectedness in the story by making situations more immediate, more dramatic, and more uncomfortable for the characters. I see how there are different degrees of making something worse, but it all honestly came from the process of asking those questions, "What would make this worse?" and if you follow exactly what Donald Maass says about that question, and the progression of the thought process of making things worse, it all fits comfortably within that scope, despite the seeming factions developing over what actually "makes it worse" and what is just increasing drama and tension. Interesting.
I suppose how we communicate as writers is a fallible experience both with the limited phraseology of writing and within the language we must use.
When I read Writing 21st Century Fiction, it's quite clear that there are a number of questions I ought to be asking myself as I conceptualize scenes and situations. They lead to a worsening effect, but it appears the concept isn't as black and white as I might have thought.
I've done several levels of making things worse, but rather than destroy everything and uproot a larger scale of the world than I originally planned, I just took my original ideas and gave them more gravity.
Is there another term for what I'm doing? I'm increasing tension and connectedness in the story by making situations more immediate, more dramatic, and more uncomfortable for the characters. I see how there are different degrees of making something worse, but it all honestly came from the process of asking those questions, "What would make this worse?" and if you follow exactly what Donald Maass says about that question, and the progression of the thought process of making things worse, it all fits comfortably within that scope, despite the seeming factions developing over what actually "makes it worse" and what is just increasing drama and tension. Interesting.
I suppose how we communicate as writers is a fallible experience both with the limited phraseology of writing and within the language we must use.
When I read Writing 21st Century Fiction, it's quite clear that there are a number of questions I ought to be asking myself as I conceptualize scenes and situations. They lead to a worsening effect, but it appears the concept isn't as black and white as I might have thought.