jackwilson
Dreamer
Hello all,
I am currently in the process of writing my first novel. It has been brewing in me for a long time, and a recent development gave me time to think.
Now I want to give this a real chance.
I plan on adding in this post the first draft of my first two chapters and would appreciate any kind of feedback. Happy to get anything from real guidance to simply what you think about it. First question into the void: does it make sense to just give you two chapters? What would be best for feedback?
Context: I have a plan for the book. And by today I have written a little less than half of it. I already know I need to further refine it anyway, that much is clear. I especially need to move further towards showing instead of telling. Would the premise help best to give me some feedback?
Thanks already everyone. Thrilled to be joining your ranks.
Jack
PS. Let me upload the cover placeholder which is more meant to inspire myself than to be the actual cover.
I am currently in the process of writing my first novel. It has been brewing in me for a long time, and a recent development gave me time to think.
Now I want to give this a real chance.
I plan on adding in this post the first draft of my first two chapters and would appreciate any kind of feedback. Happy to get anything from real guidance to simply what you think about it. First question into the void: does it make sense to just give you two chapters? What would be best for feedback?
Context: I have a plan for the book. And by today I have written a little less than half of it. I already know I need to further refine it anyway, that much is clear. I especially need to move further towards showing instead of telling. Would the premise help best to give me some feedback?
Thanks already everyone. Thrilled to be joining your ranks.
Jack
PS. Let me upload the cover placeholder which is more meant to inspire myself than to be the actual cover.