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I do appreciate your comments and you gave me things to think about . So is Adult fantasy more your genre? Do adults want to read about mid teen? This is where I am having issues. And if you are targeting Adults how do you reach that audience?

Another thing with plot is to begin by answering the questions, who, what, where, how and why and then connect those points to a beginning a middle and an end. Begin with a conflict, build to a pivotal moment and then begin the road to resolution.

Code 47 to BRV Force deals with college kids so there are more adult type topics addressed than I think are appropriate for MG - YA or NA are more the targets and even there is it more upper age teens and college students. It's hard to find that particular audience, especially for me … I am not...

I am in a few fantasy groups in FB but didn't know about this one - I will check it out thanks. are you gaining an audience for your books?

Thanks the comments have been very helpful - I am new at social media and have been turned away a lot for reviews as it has been hard to establish a superhero concept that is not a comic or graphic novel. People who have given Brev Force a chance have given me thumbs up and continued to read on...

I wrote this book for my kids who wanted to play video games and not read so I used their love of superheroes to develop a story they would read. Along the way I got into talks with Marvel and decided to write the full trilogy - so now I need to find the audience...and find open minded people...

Thanks so much for your comments- it helps to give me some direction.

I got very god reviews on goodreads but when going to reviewers they feel it is not their idea of a Fantasy for books, more for comic books or graphic novels.

Thank you all so much for your comments. I really feel like my BREV Force have found the right genre now and yes, they are teens with human frailties who take on superhero status and powers to save their friends, community and ultimately the world. The sci fi elements are there, holograms...

hi everyone I never did this before so pardon if I'm not doing it right