I'm putting this in Chit Chat as I don't think this comes under self promotion or writing forums.
1 of the books in my series has the characters sucked into a book that bears a resemblance to a disney story, a fairytale all singing, all dancing world with their memories altered. Somehow they...
I'd agree with the above, the princess would almost certainly be very quiet trying to appear as if it was all above her, she probably would feel awkward. The guy who wanted to appear as if from a rich and prosperous background who probably play up to people, being overly loud and try to appear...
Just thought I should add that I edited some of the quotes so that they made more sense on here and missed the "much" from the second quote, I am a dingbat
I have a lot of characters that I love (such as Kaylia from the Anatemia series) but the character that is most loved by readers is Sio. She's a lithe, sarcastic rogue bandit type, from a race called Syltare who are big on self sufficiency but care little for law and order. These are some of her...
I'd suggest that the battle focus on a character, or few characters, it can help to get some of the tension across by how the characters react, even seasoned naval officers will get tense and frantic. Not saying that this the best thing to do but when I write a battle I write in very short...
As the title says this is a returning hello rather than a fresh 1 as I have been a member of this site for a long time but have not visited for some time, so hello to all.
I am a comic fantasy writer but touch on worldwide issues such as racial intolerance, Lgbt and the faiths of the world...
I have to write down the entire thing in a first draft before going any further, sometimes just writing ideas as they come even if they don't quite fit yet. When I'm writing the first draft I feel as if I am watching a film and therefore what goes down first is heavy dialogue, If I don't write...
Ok, been a little self conscious about it, but I enjoyed writing this, it has only been written recently and I haven't quite checked it through properly (grammatical errors) but here it is in it's rawest form.
Please be aware there is swearing.
This is a game of capture the flag from my...