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    I need some help figuring out what's more fitting for my story

    She didn't need to be rescued or helped. Lexi saw what she thought was a woman in trouble and stepped in to try to help. Lucy wants to know because she's spent her life thinking it's survival of the fittest. She needed to know why she would do that. The aliens do need to eat food to survive. The...
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    I need some help figuring out what's more fitting for my story

    the deer wouldn't be smart enough to communicate with, but she could try.
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    I need some help figuring out what's more fitting for my story

    She didn't run into the deer, she went out and looked for one after hearing the story because it reminded her of her own race, which is why i wasn't sure what she should do next
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    I need some help figuring out what's more fitting for my story

    it is very much for adults. also, I said that a single member of a species could wipe out a planet in a few years if it WANTED to. The creatures do not have traditional stomachs. Everything they eat is digested in minutes and can be turned into mass very quickly, meaning they could just eat and...
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    I need some help figuring out what's more fitting for my story

    Hmm, maybe she starts to strangle the deer, but see other deer from it's herd nearby and lets go of it.
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    I need some help figuring out what's more fitting for my story

    I need some help figuring out what's more fitting for my story. So some context, my story is about an alien who comes to earth and lives with a human woman and her little sister. The alien (who they name Lucy) is from a race of asexual shapeshifting creatures similar to the blob. Each member of...
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    Powers for the embodiment of the seven deadly sins

    Oh, I know. That's why I didn't want Lust to have something like pheromones. They want more than just sex, they want pleasure, enjoyment, living and enjoying the moment regardless of who suffers because of it. They are overindulgence at it's finest. They are selfish just like Greed, the...
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    Powers for the embodiment of the seven deadly sins

    interesting. As for limitations, only Sloth could destroy a mountain (sorry if that's vague). They (and I) don't entirely know their origins or why they were created but they don't really care except for Envy, who wants to meet his creator and ask why they made him like this. The only thing they...
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    Powers for the embodiment of the seven deadly sins

    yeah, that's why i was leaning more towards telekinesis
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    Powers for the embodiment of the seven deadly sins

    maybe. i only thought of 1/2 this stuff as i typed it. maybe because i thought people would be viewing it made me more creative or something. maybe it's just inspiration after compiling everything together.
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    Powers for the embodiment of the seven deadly sins

    the main antagonists of my story are the embodiments of the seven deadly sins and I wanted to give each a unique power aside from their standard strength, agility and such. This is what I've got so far: Gluttony with size changing Lust with Shapeshifting Wrath with fire/heat Pride with mental...
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    Monsters Needed

    Make your own. Go through a list of animals and pick two at random
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    Powers for the seven deadly sins

    I like the time manipulation and power drain. I haven't fully worked out the details yet, but what I do know for sure are that Wrath is the weakest and Pride is the leader and seemingly the strongest. In truth, Sloth is the most powerful and deep down, Pride knows it. It burns him up inside and...
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    Powers for the seven deadly sins

    the main antagonists of my story are the seven deadly sins and I wanted to give each a power. So far I've got Gluttony with size changing (because eating) Lust with Shapeshfiting (because psychical looks) and Wrath with fire/heat (because anger). Any ideas for Pride, Greed, Envy and Sloth?
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    Are you hestitant to use your best ideas?

    Yes. I feel like I should wait until I'm better to do it.
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