Recent content by ClearDragon

I know right! I saw how big the place was from the outside, but only got to explore a small part of it.

I'm aiming for something like that. There's a much worse villain he was fighting, but he got carried away with the "fight fire with fire" concept.

Yes that makes sense. Basically Spectral is kept hidden for a while for his own protection and the protection of others in case he really doesn't change his ways. Also another question, would it be jarring to have the point of view switch between the two brothers? Like the chapters pov switch...

My similar. The brothers once did work together, but a rift formed from a misunderstanding. Also Spectral wasn't at the absolute bottom of evil, he had a noble goal in mind but disregarded the lives of mortals, there actually is a much greater evil he wanted to fight. Then although Astral...

Yeah, my villain is not being simply pardoned or forgiven, he was already punished very severally and was told if he reverted to his old ways he'd be punished a lot worse.

I understand, and yeah I hope I can write it well.

True and good points. Maybe it can be both? Like if Astral really does hope his brother can be redeemed, but also wants the resources he had.

So one of my villains "Spectral" a Sauron like being is also one of my favorite characters. I have the idea that instead of being destroyed at the end of the story, what if he slowly is redeemed so I can have him in future stories? My idea is basically, at the end of the war when his armies are...

It could be considered a shopping mall. It was just way bigger then any I've ever heard of. Like the building was almost as tall as the world trade center in NYC, and just as wide as it was tall!

In the dream I was with family and we made a big get together and trip to this enormous store. It was like a hundred stories tall and shaped like two hexagons attached together along a side. The place literally had everything you can imagine, groceries, furniture, appliances, clothing, tools and...

Could be a good fantasy horror story!

Oh very interesting.

Recently I had a dream about this weird shopping mall. It was like a big "U" shape. It had just one entrance at the end of one "arm" Also it had like hundred foot callings and floor to ceiling windows that where a single pane of glass. Can they even make glass like that? The most strange part...

Well whenever you have stuff written about it I'd like to read it. I like the idea of a planet thats so old. Goodnight.

Whoa! A two trillion year old planet! I find that idea fascinating, especially since you have the planet apparently falling apart. I want to know more about this world.