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  1. Things that need to be put to word so they no longer plague my brain

    The Lengths of Vengeance

    The guns of the HIMAS Sovereign unleashed a colossal roar at the behest of the Dark Lord’s magic. The airship was the pinnacle of the Empire’s engineering and magical might. The perfect union of humanity’s creativity and cooperation, and of their debauchery and malice. In truth, the Dark Lord...
  2. Things that need to be put to word so they no longer plague my brain

    Things that need to be put to word so they no longer plague my brain

    The title says it all. This will be short stories and random ideas that i really don't want swimming around in my brain any more. They aren't super serious in writing nature but might get kind of heavy depending on is striking me when I write them.
  3. Faust's Folly

    Chapter 6

    I delayed last week and almost forgot! "It is curious to reflect upon the rapid advancement of humanity in the last 1000 years. I find it appalling that the few remaining mortal races, that were not human and survived the Purge of Kabbahla, have otherwise disappeared. How long has it been, dear...
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    Trouble with Writing Voice

    It's all good, I'm in no big rush and have plenty going on in my life. This is just to feel things out because I'm super green
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    Trouble with Writing Voice

    I've edited the work that prompted this post about that many times. An original draft was written I think 8 years ago now, it got redone, then it got redone again. Then a huge bunch of editing to that draft. I decided I could hone it more so then went from draft 3.2.004 to draft 4. Then I...
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    Trouble with Writing Voice

    Thank you
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    Trouble with Writing Voice

    Well at least that is what I'm trying right now with this forum!
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    Trouble with Writing Voice

    So this is a general question...statement? ANYWAY. One of the big troubles I have when writing is trying to read with a "voice" that is not my own. I feel like this is important to any basic critique and editing process and I really struggle with it. I usually can construct a narratives that I...
  9. Faust's Folly

    Chapter 5

    The weekend has come.... World building happens in this chapter. I have no energy to try to create a special little narrative. Never trust cake, it is a lie. FINLAND! Chapter 5
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    How to connect three different worlds?

    If things like The Force, The One Ring, Captain America, and Batman can be catchy classics simple things like The Guardians can too. Don't discount your idea.
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    How to connect three different worlds?

    Honestly, maybe binging Disenchantment has affected my view, but just a magical trapdoor. Anytime anyone needs a banishment to the lower realm, it's there, ready to drop them in. It's a portal, it's magic, it's whimsical. Heck, in world a whole group of people could even worship it as a divine...
  12. Faust's Folly

    Chapter 4

    Well well well well.... It's that time of week again. and this time I have some fun stuff to add before the chapter link! In the first age when humanity first took up the mantle of Balance, the world knew peace. Cooperation between human tribes and other mortals was plentiful and Faustenmire's...
  13. Faust's Folly

    Chapter 3

    Howdy again! Welcome to the first chapter with old notes attached. You are welcome to read past the outline marker that says "(old)" but that's not really the current product. Maybe i'll come up with some type of special thing for the ones with edits in them, that remains to be seen as i just...
  14. Faust's Folly

    Chapter 2

    Please click the link to keep reading. This will be standard as my chapters average around 3.5k words. Thanks for the support! Chapter 2
  15. Faust's Folly

    Chapter 1

    So yea...apparently there is a character limit so I'm going to go out on a limb here and use my global link to the version in my google drive.... Pretty annoying that there is a character limit in a writing portfolio, but hey, I don't make the rules. Anyway... Clicking the link should...
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