Recent content by mahmoud

Introduction Whispers in the Sand The desert night was not silent. It breathed. Winds carried ancient murmurs, voices long buried beneath layers of forgotten time. The stars watched like distant gods, unmoving, unblinking. witnesses to fates lost and yet to be written. A lone figure moved across...

There is no suicide, only a struggle between betrayal, the forces of evil, and the last hope.

Death was not the end here... but the forgotten dream we dream without ever waking. In the city of immortality, no one dies, yet we all slowly dissolve, as if punished for still being alive

I'm glad you liked the concept! The idea of immortality as a curse opens the door to deep emotional and phil osophical layers what happens when time no longer matters, but pain still does? If you're interested, I’d be happy to share more twists from the sto ry!

"I deliberately avoided speaking directly about religions or God in my story, because the focus was on human struggles and the quest for power within the immortal city. The rule in this city is not conventional; it is a despotic regime based on strength and tyranny, where injustice prevails and...

At the heart of City of Immortality, every step you take uncovers a mystery bigger than the last. Ryan, the seeker of truth, ventures into a city haunted by the secret of immortality and an unforgiving curse. Will he escape before the curse consumes him? Will he unravel the mystery of Alex, the...

Great idea, and I’m really glad you came up with it! But in my story, Ryan is the main character, and his main motivation for entering the city is mystery and exploration. He discovers that entering the city is easy, but escaping it is impossible because of the curse of immortality. He also...

I’m not sure if the forum’s policy allows me to share a link to parts of the novel or not. Can I send them to you for evaluation?

Thank you so much! Your support means a lot to me. Would you like me to share some excerpts from the novel with you?

Thank you so much! That truly means a lot to me. I'm glad you enjoyed it there's a lot more to come, and I’d love to hear your thoughts as the story unfolds!

Hello everyone, I'm excited to join this amazing community of fantasy writers and readers! I’m currently working on a fantasy novel titled City of Immortality. It’s a blend of epic fantasy, mystery, and a touch of dark magic. The story follows Ryan, a wanderer who discovers a cursed desert city...

Thank you for the warm welcome! You're absolutely right I'm still working on improving my English, and I really appreciate your patience. I'll do my best to write in English from now on. I'm excited to be part of this community and to share my fantasy novel with you al l!

مرحباً جميعاً، يسعدني أن أشارككم بداية روايتي الخيالية "مدينة الخلود". تدور أحداث هذه القصة في مدينة صحراوية غامضة حيث لا يموت أحد، ولكن بثمن باهظ. إنه مزيج من الخيال المظلم والسحر القديم والتمرد والغموض. إذا كنت تستمتع بالأجواء