This is just a start of the plot an idea but this is different than the mermaid story, as I am still working on it and as I am going to give it an overhaul. The basic idea for the story appears to be a fun one. Thought some thoughts on how to make it differenet even more would be helpful...
Answer to your questions balthore
In answer to your questions, Zavaro is a bad witch she is after Lord Savron as he has great powers ones that if he were with Zavaro it would make her even more powerful.
The story itself is different than the mermaid story. No fish or signing crab. :D lol...
have been working on a gnome story for a while now and I am stuck on some places in the story and would like some ideas please. In this post below is a summary of the story I'm stuck on. if you need more information or detail or clarification please let me know. Or if I need to put this into a...
I have need of wording on this story and how to build this magical world where the Gnome Lord Savron lives. Typed below is what I have so far for it. What I need help on along with some grammar help think I have the spelling errors corrected. Again I am sorry for all the errors in one other post...
For me I still like to write in old antique looking journals with pen. Its fun to me classic way of writing I suppose but then after I have it all written down I type it up on the comptuer. This way it's corrected of spelling errors etc. Then print it off then I edit it some more untill finally...
This story opener you created is good I'd like to read more of it. It makes me want to read more about how they learn and use thier powers. Sometimes with magic it can be a learning experence to with some comic elements to it. Go with the ideas I'd like to read more.
Starrynight
I write becasue it's my creative outlet and its fun. Writing fantacy romance is fun. Taking the elements of real live and adding in magic it's fun. I am not a painter but with my stories I paint on the canvas of peoples imaganations. Sometimes making them laugh or tugging at their heart strings...
Reading your post thought I'd offer an opinion, setting and chracters and what their story is introducing them and creating them in the readers imaganation. I try to do that with my stories.
Starrynight
Here are more details on the ideas
Pardon the confusion on the ideas the first idea I'm looking for more specify on ideas is Lord Savron though a gnome has fallen in love with Terragon. Having fallen in love with her he despite the protest of a friend of his goes to a witch who at a price...
Hi I am new here and I wanted to say Hi and I have been writing for a long time and needed some feed back on these story idea starts. Thease are just a rough draft and I am going to turn them into stories later needed some thoughts and ideas for them.
Thank you for your help and thoughts...