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    Is there a company willing to publish this?

    Regretably, no. 43 is the longest I was able to get out of it, even with trying to plaster in some filler. Making it longer would draw it out and I have no idea how to do that and make it somehow entertaining.
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    Is there a company willing to publish this?

    I recently finished my Yoltrund project and I submitted it to a couple low-end companies, some self-publishing, and all have rejected it because of its morbid and controversial content. I think that I am thinking a little too small and I need to know some more companies. Do you guys know any...
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    A new Inferno

    Thanks for the help. Actually, that could help me out a little bit because some of the people and ideas some of my friends suggested could easily be brought into Yoltrund, but I would have no clue where to put them. I can understand where you're coming from with using lust as an example because...
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    A new Inferno

    Well hey guys. Been a while since I've posted. My Junsereig series is going well so moving away from that. On to another thing. My English class is reading Inferno (one of my favorite pieces of literature of all time) and we have been tasked with an interesting assignment over spring break...
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    Perfect character, no story

    Well, whoever has played the game Dishonored, you will be quite in shock. After playing the game an enjoying the options and the fun, I had something come to me, along with some other projects I made. I build random things in my spare time from USB powered A/C units that are the size of a...
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    How to write dates

    It's OK about the double post. Yeah, I'm sorry about the clutter. There's a lot going on in this story and trying to keep it all in line kind of got out of line. I mainly reduced down info in the original post to prevent clutter. I guess that's a sign that things got out of control. Taking...
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    How to write dates

    I'll give that a shot. Maybe, the Templarian line can be condensed because a whole ton of stuff happens during the beginning of their existence, but nothing really major minus Arylos's rise to power to Shadow Alchemist, and then the Templarian Rebellion at the end of the book shortly after...
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    How to write dates

    I can probably find a way to change the names from eras or something. But each era for each timeline does signify a specific event. I just try to keep them even for sake of easy math. As I said, the Reig came into the story to teach and rule man, marking the beginning of the Fourth Era on the...
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    How to write dates

    I could try that out. I also don't blame you for finding the eras confusing; the dates are freakishly long. The sad news is that without those eras, it would be even harder to date. Remember, the Kaiyumian calendar has a total length of 12,000 years up to the events in the book, while the Reig...
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    How to write dates

    I can do the dating no problem, I just need to sort out when EXACTLY it happened so that it is easier to write. Kind of how we write today for example; 08/24/2014AD or 24th of August of 2014 Ano Domini How would people like the Kaiyumae write their dates in this fashion. That's when I brought up...
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    How to write dates

    Well, I came across good progress in my series and now it's time to date everything. The series is going to focus on 4 different races/cultures. Listed by size, they are Kaiyumae, Templarian, Semigoian, and Reig. I won't go into detail as to what happened yet, but right now, I need to come up...
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    The Tongue of the Reig

    So far, the Reig, a new race I decided to add into my series, has captured my attention recently. They are a last minute addition and I want to make sure that it is perfect, which means building them off of scraps. The Reig are dragons that live deep within the Void. They protect it and build...
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    Junsedov (King of Dragons) Culture set-up

    OK, I have most of everything set up. I just need the language for the Reig and what lore would be behind them. I have it permanent that they are the Guardians of the Voids and the first Gods, even the Templarians came from the Reig. They are feared, and mysterious. They hid themselves so well...
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    Junsedov (King of Dragons) Culture set-up

    I'm trying. It's not that his hide is holy; they garb the new King in the flesh of the past one as a sign that he defeated the past King. The Raig (I'll experiment and see if it sticks) mainly identify each other not only by name, but by skin type, and voice volume and pitch. When they see the...
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    Junsedov (King of Dragons) Culture set-up

    I could probably change the syllables. I'm planning on the Dragons on using a language similar to Dovahzul so until I make a language for them, I'm using those names so I can translate them into the new language. I also found a replacement for "Dov", at least I think. I think I can use the...
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