Hi all.
I'm fairly new here, and am looking for a place to receive some feedback about my stories. The current story I'm working on is about a new girl, Ambra, who moves to town, who is actually a mermaid, or siren to be exact. The girls are naturally jealous of her because she is so...
In keeping with the ideas I first explored in the Orkhes I wanted the Merepeople to be more fishlike, while still being relatable, and possibly attractive. The "hair" is more like tentacles, the ears close underwater to better pick up sonar, and the tail is vertically oriented like a...