Greetings all - I am looking for feedback on a book that I am writing, and was directed here. The full work is about ~15000 words. I would be very interested in hearing feedback about the style and message of the story. It is a mythical allegory written through 3 concurrent stories with 5 acts...
“If I made Avengers: Infinity War, it would be a mythic tragedy — cursed, cosmic, and emotionally devastating. This is my alternate version, fused with my original my universe.”
Act I: The Rise of Galactus and the Hell Queen’s Curse
- Galactus becomes the Final Boss of hell Asgard, seeking...