style

I´m planning, God willing, insha'Allah, to write a fantasy series, but my major concern is my prose style; my first language isn't English. It's Arabic, but, I'd say, I'm quite competent, but my style doesn't conform to English's usual preferences. Still, I'm writing fiction, so there should be...

When I write my drafts, I sometimes find myself going deep into the POV character to the point of writing in their voice. Then when I edit, I'll correct some off this language and bring it back a little bit toward the overall style of the book. I want the reader to identify and stay immersed in...