Fyle
Inkling
Basically, my question is not about how to write a chapter with multiple POVs, but if it bothers readers.
I notice in a few of my chapters I have 2 POVs, I start the chatper with one, and then the second half of the chapter switches to another.
Generally characters that were together and part ways - I don't jump to a random place far away or something completely different. The content is always clear as to the physical actions and what is happening.
So, do you mind 2 POVs in one chapter, or would it be best just to condense down to 1 POV? (some exceptions will be made in cases I am certain are working, but I have others I am undecided on that could be consdensed to 1 POV)
thanks
I notice in a few of my chapters I have 2 POVs, I start the chatper with one, and then the second half of the chapter switches to another.
Generally characters that were together and part ways - I don't jump to a random place far away or something completely different. The content is always clear as to the physical actions and what is happening.
So, do you mind 2 POVs in one chapter, or would it be best just to condense down to 1 POV? (some exceptions will be made in cases I am certain are working, but I have others I am undecided on that could be consdensed to 1 POV)
thanks