Twilight Goblin
Dreamer
There is this story that I've been working on, a pet project that I haven't let anyone read. I've just finished re writing the whole thing from the various scraps of handy paper and pages that I had scattered in my Notebook Box. I was proud of myself for finishing it. But as I was re reading it, I noticed that I used a lot of "And Then"s, "Suddenly"s and the ever present "Jumps From One Scene To The Next With No Explaination"s. Plus, I'm not satisfied with the conclusion-followed-by-ending that I have.
Does anyone have tips on fixing my story's flow problem?
Does anyone have tips on fixing my story's flow problem?