Hi folks
I'm planning to self publish my debut novel early in 2021 (initially exclusively on Amazon as an ebook). I'd love to get some feedback on the following book description - do you think it's compelling enough to make readers want to read the book and find out what happens? Does it make sense?
Thanks!
Andrew
I'm planning to self publish my debut novel early in 2021 (initially exclusively on Amazon as an ebook). I'd love to get some feedback on the following book description - do you think it's compelling enough to make readers want to read the book and find out what happens? Does it make sense?
Thanks!
Andrew
When you discover your heroes failed, who can you rely on?
Betharad’s sorcerer parents died decades ago saving their town from a deadly enemy. She and her siblings struggle in their own ways to live up to that legacy.
Now elected leader of the town, Betharad has plans to bring greater prosperity to its people. Her restless younger sister Jessa needs a focus for her energy and fierce loyalty, while their brother Sarnd wishes he had the courage to follow his dreams and become an artist.
Their lives begin to unravel when they discover their parents’ enemy wasn’t defeated after all—he’s back, and intent on picking up where he left off.
Born with no magical abilities, Betharad and her siblings are overwhelmed as more and more secrets are exposed, making them question everything they thought they knew. Meanwhile, the dangers surrounding them multiply, including some they believed were only dark legends. Their whole world might be at risk, but they have no idea how to save it.
A group of strangers arrives offering help. But will the price be too high?
Betharad’s sorcerer parents died decades ago saving their town from a deadly enemy. She and her siblings struggle in their own ways to live up to that legacy.
Now elected leader of the town, Betharad has plans to bring greater prosperity to its people. Her restless younger sister Jessa needs a focus for her energy and fierce loyalty, while their brother Sarnd wishes he had the courage to follow his dreams and become an artist.
Their lives begin to unravel when they discover their parents’ enemy wasn’t defeated after all—he’s back, and intent on picking up where he left off.
Born with no magical abilities, Betharad and her siblings are overwhelmed as more and more secrets are exposed, making them question everything they thought they knew. Meanwhile, the dangers surrounding them multiply, including some they believed were only dark legends. Their whole world might be at risk, but they have no idea how to save it.
A group of strangers arrives offering help. But will the price be too high?