General help questions.

[HopefullAA]

Hi, Im not an author but and i dont want to be published but im on my first novel and have serious doubts about my writing. Im on my first novel of a planned series and as of writing am 3 chapters in. ive been slowly building the lore of my story over a bit over a year and now that ive started writing I would apprutiate if anyone could simply read what i have or even a small part of it. Don't worry about being nice. I mainly want to know whether the characters feel real, whether the worldbuilding feels natural or dumped on you, whether the prose feels amateur, and where you stopped being immersed. I'm sorry this this isn't the right place to ask but I'm very new to all of this. if you are interested please reply.

 

[pmmg]

Well...You are an author, and welcome here. This is not the right place for that, but I am sure a Mod will move it to where it belongs. This should probably go in introductions, or critique requests. Since you are requesting a critique, you could post a snippet of your writing into critique requests and some of us will be bound to look at it.

You need to participate and make 5 posts for the site to open up for you, so you may not be able to posts there yet.

 

[HopefullAA]

okay thank you i really appreciate it.