Hellow everyone!

[martin]

Hello, I’m Noah. It’s a pleasure to meet all of you.
I’m an independent author, and I’ve recently published my epic fantasy novel on Amazon. I currently have two books out.
The first book is more descriptive and focused on world-building, where I explore the creation of System Prime, its political divisions, and the beginning of the conflict between light and darkness.
The second book shifts more toward action. It follows the growth of the protagonist, the difficult choices he must face, and the consequences each decision brings.
If possible, I’d really appreciate it if you could give it a read. It’s currently free for Kindle Unlimited users.
I’m genuinely looking for honest feedback. Reviews don’t even have to be posted on Amazon — you can leave them right here if you prefer.
My goal is simply to grow as a writer and understand how readers truly feel about my work.

The book name is Chronicles of Helion: The light bearer.

My books are available in both English and Spanish editions.

Thank you in advance.

 

[Prince of Spires]

Welcome! They sound like interesting novels.

How / why do you have both English and Spanish versions?

 

[martin]

Welcome! They sound like interesting novels.

How / why do you have both English and Spanish versions?

Thanks! I appreciate that.

I have both English and Spanish versions because I want to reach a wider audience. Spanish is my native language, so I originally wrote the story in Spanish. But since a big part of the fantasy market is in English, I translated and adapted the books to connect with more readers worldwide.

Also, some elements were slightly adjusted in English to feel more natural for that audience, not just a literal translation but an adaptation of the experience.

 

[RoccO]

It sounds like an interesting premise. Bilingual? Cool!

 

[pmmg]

Howdy Martin, Welcome here.

You've published this one. So, its not in workshop mode anymore. Reviews are meant for readers... If you want to improve as a writing, I will suggest participating in workshop type forums (like this one), and reviewing the crap out of other peoples stuff. That is the fastest way to it.