taroufish
New Member
Hello everyone,
I'm looking for advice on a my novel I'm trying to write and I realise there's just too many chase scenes.
I have a wizard and his companion who have escaped from jail and they're being chased by two guards - so they're obviously being chased by them. And then a monster breaks loose and there's two separate scenes where it chases the MCs and then in a separate scene it chases after the two guards. They have to encounter this monster as it rampages through the cities but I feel like all this chasing around feels really repetitive (not to mention it's boring to write) so is there any other means of building tension?
I'm looking for advice on a my novel I'm trying to write and I realise there's just too many chase scenes.
I have a wizard and his companion who have escaped from jail and they're being chased by two guards - so they're obviously being chased by them. And then a monster breaks loose and there's two separate scenes where it chases the MCs and then in a separate scene it chases after the two guards. They have to encounter this monster as it rampages through the cities but I feel like all this chasing around feels really repetitive (not to mention it's boring to write) so is there any other means of building tension?