Hi folks!
So I've been writing a story about a crime boss' mistress, and through the first couple chapters, I didn't feel the need to detail WHERE they lived, only what the house was like and some general details about the town itself, like that it was a port town founded on trade, and that imports and exports were the main foundation of the economy.
If I had to compare the town to one in history, i'd say it's sort of like Renaissance Venice in some ways (though it has a mayor rather than a doge, and there is a civilian guild council, rather than a noble senate). It's independent of any king or local nobility (no one owns it, but trade guilds govern commerce). There are wealthy, middle class, and lower class families, and it's a populous town, one of the biggest in the country.
I guess my question is how would a crime boss live, and I'm looking for ideas that will hopefully fit into what I've already created. I'm worried that in the first draft, critiques indicated that some of what I have planned seems unlikely because I didn't plan it out in a manner that's convincing, so i'm trying to remedy that in this rewrite.
In The Lies of Locke Lamora, Capa Barsavi lived in a shabby dwelling in the lower-class part of town. He was surrounded by criminals and therefore had a sort of buffer against the outside world, functioning among the lower rungs of society.
In Borgias, the conniving and criminal members of the family were wealthy and lived a lavish lifestyle, yet weren't guarded from the outside world, really. They had reputations that kept them safe, and allies that supported them, and since their patriarch was the pope...well, there were assassination attempts and plenty of folks trying to do away with the corruption, but the family functioned separate from the government itself for the most part.
I was watching Wolf of Wall Street a couple nights ago, and in the ending, after learning all about this loud character and his outrageous behavior, I was left wondering where his house was, because there were no neighbors, and seemingly no one cared what he was up to. No protestors or angry visitors complaining about how he was ripping them off (at least not in the movie), and there was very little security shown (I can't remember any at all).
So, in my story, a few chapters from now, some people barge into the crime boss' manor and take my MC forcibly from the house. The early comments from feedback were questions of whether that could even happen?
What do you guys think? If my crime boss lives in a mansion, and it's set within the town, is it unlikely that someone could force their way into his house? I envision his home being rather similar to the brothel in Assassin's Creed II, where it's a lone house that takes up the block. Three stories, with a fenced garden and trees surrounding it for privacy. No adjoining neighbors, and not too much foot traffic. I feel like he lives in the garden district, among wealthy families, but then it made me think about how his neighbors view his loud parties and the kind of folks he invites over, like Wolf of Wall Street.
I have not established a city guard in this city, and I don't know whether Renaissance Venice had one or not. I have hired security in this home for parties, to keep things calm in the case of conflicts, but I didn't know whether he'd have permanent security in place. Again, referencing those examples above. Is permanent security necessary? Indicated? Desirable?
How can I feasibly have an intruder defeat whatever security measures are in place? The tech level is like late Renaissance, where most people carry swords for personal protection, but guns exist and are expensive and rare.
Any thoughts would be great. I'm probably missing some of the questions I should be asking, as well.
Thanks in advance!
So I've been writing a story about a crime boss' mistress, and through the first couple chapters, I didn't feel the need to detail WHERE they lived, only what the house was like and some general details about the town itself, like that it was a port town founded on trade, and that imports and exports were the main foundation of the economy.
If I had to compare the town to one in history, i'd say it's sort of like Renaissance Venice in some ways (though it has a mayor rather than a doge, and there is a civilian guild council, rather than a noble senate). It's independent of any king or local nobility (no one owns it, but trade guilds govern commerce). There are wealthy, middle class, and lower class families, and it's a populous town, one of the biggest in the country.
I guess my question is how would a crime boss live, and I'm looking for ideas that will hopefully fit into what I've already created. I'm worried that in the first draft, critiques indicated that some of what I have planned seems unlikely because I didn't plan it out in a manner that's convincing, so i'm trying to remedy that in this rewrite.
In The Lies of Locke Lamora, Capa Barsavi lived in a shabby dwelling in the lower-class part of town. He was surrounded by criminals and therefore had a sort of buffer against the outside world, functioning among the lower rungs of society.
In Borgias, the conniving and criminal members of the family were wealthy and lived a lavish lifestyle, yet weren't guarded from the outside world, really. They had reputations that kept them safe, and allies that supported them, and since their patriarch was the pope...well, there were assassination attempts and plenty of folks trying to do away with the corruption, but the family functioned separate from the government itself for the most part.
I was watching Wolf of Wall Street a couple nights ago, and in the ending, after learning all about this loud character and his outrageous behavior, I was left wondering where his house was, because there were no neighbors, and seemingly no one cared what he was up to. No protestors or angry visitors complaining about how he was ripping them off (at least not in the movie), and there was very little security shown (I can't remember any at all).
So, in my story, a few chapters from now, some people barge into the crime boss' manor and take my MC forcibly from the house. The early comments from feedback were questions of whether that could even happen?
What do you guys think? If my crime boss lives in a mansion, and it's set within the town, is it unlikely that someone could force their way into his house? I envision his home being rather similar to the brothel in Assassin's Creed II, where it's a lone house that takes up the block. Three stories, with a fenced garden and trees surrounding it for privacy. No adjoining neighbors, and not too much foot traffic. I feel like he lives in the garden district, among wealthy families, but then it made me think about how his neighbors view his loud parties and the kind of folks he invites over, like Wolf of Wall Street.
I have not established a city guard in this city, and I don't know whether Renaissance Venice had one or not. I have hired security in this home for parties, to keep things calm in the case of conflicts, but I didn't know whether he'd have permanent security in place. Again, referencing those examples above. Is permanent security necessary? Indicated? Desirable?
How can I feasibly have an intruder defeat whatever security measures are in place? The tech level is like late Renaissance, where most people carry swords for personal protection, but guns exist and are expensive and rare.
Any thoughts would be great. I'm probably missing some of the questions I should be asking, as well.
Thanks in advance!