SageI have posted in other forums to get my work critiqued and I have always disagreed with them telling them why I have it this way instead of that way etc.
The only critique partners I have are my mom and grandma and even with their great editing skills I still think it is a little biased towards me being a great writer.
I have several stories that I think need critiqued before I write any more of it.
One is my lion story called Pride Search. I have already had the first and second chapters of it critiqued but I have 3 other chapters that need critiqued as well.
Then there is Cubik's World which is a story about twisty puzzles that concentrates on cubes. People have always thought that I should use something other than numbers for them since all I use is their size to address them in my dialogue.
If you want to do a chapter by chapter critique of either one of these stories then either post here or PM me or both.
The only critique partners I have are my mom and grandma and even with their great editing skills I still think it is a little biased towards me being a great writer.
I have several stories that I think need critiqued before I write any more of it.
One is my lion story called Pride Search. I have already had the first and second chapters of it critiqued but I have 3 other chapters that need critiqued as well.
Then there is Cubik's World which is a story about twisty puzzles that concentrates on cubes. People have always thought that I should use something other than numbers for them since all I use is their size to address them in my dialogue.
If you want to do a chapter by chapter critique of either one of these stories then either post here or PM me or both.
