Mindfire
Istar
Just wanted to get some opinions on the creatures I've come up with for my WIP- 25 so far. Please give them a look and tell me what you think. I've included each creatures name, a brief description, and some examples of real world animals or mythical creatures that inspired each entry with links for the ones you may not be familiar with. Creatures with nicknames have them shown alongside their official names in quotes and parentheses. For convenience, I have sorted them into smaller groups by range and habitat and included a map for reference. All of these are enclosed in spoiler tags to make this post less intimidating. I'm eager to know what you guys think.
Btw, the Temeth Sea is the body of water that lies between the mainland and the two off-lands: Haldor and Urthrak. You don't get to the Falden Ocean proper until you go beyond those two. It's not labeled because that version of the map is a couple days out of date.
Ashepri
Description: An amphibious dragon with a coat of dappled grey and white waterproof feathers, a venomous harpoon-like projectile tongue, expanding jaws, and needle-like teeth that inhabits the Crystal Sea and parts of the Glacier Ridge. It is a distant relative of the duneviper and extinct Vardican dragon.
Inspirations: penguin, sea serpent, cone snail
Snowfox
Description: A cunning, solitary animal native to the mountains bordering the Crystal Sea. It can communicate telepathically through images and emotions and exert control over lesser elementals. It is a distant relative of the Direwolf.
Inspirations: arctic fox
Ursine
Description: An enormous, burly predator that in most things greatly resembles its smaller cousin the mountain bear, but is armed with much larger claws and large tusks. The brown ursine can range from the Medved Mountains to the eastern reaches of the Beorgian Wildermarch, while the white ursine inhabits the Glacier Ridge Mountains. The ursine is an opportunistic predator, omnivore, and scavenger. They have been known to steal carcasses from ashepri on occasion.
Inspirations: polar bear, grizzly bear
Description: An amphibious dragon with a coat of dappled grey and white waterproof feathers, a venomous harpoon-like projectile tongue, expanding jaws, and needle-like teeth that inhabits the Crystal Sea and parts of the Glacier Ridge. It is a distant relative of the duneviper and extinct Vardican dragon.
Inspirations: penguin, sea serpent, cone snail
Snowfox
Description: A cunning, solitary animal native to the mountains bordering the Crystal Sea. It can communicate telepathically through images and emotions and exert control over lesser elementals. It is a distant relative of the Direwolf.
Inspirations: arctic fox
Ursine
Description: An enormous, burly predator that in most things greatly resembles its smaller cousin the mountain bear, but is armed with much larger claws and large tusks. The brown ursine can range from the Medved Mountains to the eastern reaches of the Beorgian Wildermarch, while the white ursine inhabits the Glacier Ridge Mountains. The ursine is an opportunistic predator, omnivore, and scavenger. They have been known to steal carcasses from ashepri on occasion.
Inspirations: polar bear, grizzly bear
Devonian
Description: A colossal mollusk with an impenetrable shell, several large tentacles, hooked talons, and powerful jaws that lives in the Vardican Sea and Thalas Ocean. Mawfish are its primary prey, but it has been known to destroy entire ships for a meal.
Inspirations: the krakken, colossal squid, nautilus
Mawfish
Description: A massive armor-plated fish with spiny fins and a bone-crushing beak.
Inspirations: dunkleosteus, coelocanth, great white shark
Sea Scorpion
Description: A marine predator and distant relative of the trylobite that ranges from the Temeth Sea to the marshes of Urthrak. It preys mainly on fish.
Inspirations: euryptids
Description: A colossal mollusk with an impenetrable shell, several large tentacles, hooked talons, and powerful jaws that lives in the Vardican Sea and Thalas Ocean. Mawfish are its primary prey, but it has been known to destroy entire ships for a meal.
Inspirations: the krakken, colossal squid, nautilus
Mawfish
Description: A massive armor-plated fish with spiny fins and a bone-crushing beak.
Inspirations: dunkleosteus, coelocanth, great white shark
Sea Scorpion
Description: A marine predator and distant relative of the trylobite that ranges from the Temeth Sea to the marshes of Urthrak. It preys mainly on fish.
Inspirations: euryptids
Duneviper
Description: A giant serpent that inhabits the Mavari desert, largely an ambush predator. It has enormous needle-point fangs that it uses to impale its prey. It draws its name from the fact that large members of this species have been mistaken for actual dunes as they lie in wait under the sand.
Inspirations: cobra, sidewinder
Gargon
Description: A large, vicious predator with a stocky physique, legs that are fairly short proportional to its body, and an elongated head with crushing, vicelike jaws equipped with razor-sharp teeth. It somewhat resembles a reptilian tiger and is a distant relative of the Quillin. It roams the Mavari desert and savannah in packs that have been known to bring down even dunevipers on occasion. Its mouth harbors bacteria that rapidly infect its prey upon biting, guaranteeing a kill.
Inspirations: gorgonops, pristerognathus, komodo dragon
Handak ("dust devil")
Description: A small, ferret-like creature with a runty body and a round head armed with a strong beak and prominent tusks. The handak inhabits the Mavari desert and savannah, living in small underground colonies clustered around a food source. They are extremely territorial and will attack without provocation. They compete viciously for food within colonies, but will warn each other if danger is spotted.
Inspirations: diictodon, meerkats, scottish terrier
Kindrake
Description: A lumbering cow-like reptile with a hulking, barrel-chested body, a short tail, thick shoulders, stumpy legs, and a proportionally small head protected by a bony plate. This herbivorous gentle giant roams from the savannah to the westernmost edges of the Elyssian Delta and is often prey to the gargon. The kindrake has historically been used by the Mavarians as a beast of burden.
Inspirations: scutosaurus
Madrigan Horse ("camelhorse")
Description: A unique and beautiful breed of horses indigenous to the Mavari desert and grasslands that can go an extraordinary length of time without the need for water.
Inspirations: Arabian
Scarab
Description: A giant beetle that lives in the Mavari desert. It has incredibly strong mandibles, a tough armored shell, and the ability to recover from nearly any injury.
Inspirations: scarab beetle
Trylobite
Description: A large marine arthropod with poisonous jaws that often beaches on Mavarian shores.
Inspirations: trilobite
Description: A giant serpent that inhabits the Mavari desert, largely an ambush predator. It has enormous needle-point fangs that it uses to impale its prey. It draws its name from the fact that large members of this species have been mistaken for actual dunes as they lie in wait under the sand.
Inspirations: cobra, sidewinder
Gargon
Description: A large, vicious predator with a stocky physique, legs that are fairly short proportional to its body, and an elongated head with crushing, vicelike jaws equipped with razor-sharp teeth. It somewhat resembles a reptilian tiger and is a distant relative of the Quillin. It roams the Mavari desert and savannah in packs that have been known to bring down even dunevipers on occasion. Its mouth harbors bacteria that rapidly infect its prey upon biting, guaranteeing a kill.
Inspirations: gorgonops, pristerognathus, komodo dragon
Handak ("dust devil")
Description: A small, ferret-like creature with a runty body and a round head armed with a strong beak and prominent tusks. The handak inhabits the Mavari desert and savannah, living in small underground colonies clustered around a food source. They are extremely territorial and will attack without provocation. They compete viciously for food within colonies, but will warn each other if danger is spotted.
Inspirations: diictodon, meerkats, scottish terrier
Kindrake
Description: A lumbering cow-like reptile with a hulking, barrel-chested body, a short tail, thick shoulders, stumpy legs, and a proportionally small head protected by a bony plate. This herbivorous gentle giant roams from the savannah to the westernmost edges of the Elyssian Delta and is often prey to the gargon. The kindrake has historically been used by the Mavarians as a beast of burden.
Inspirations: scutosaurus
Madrigan Horse ("camelhorse")
Description: A unique and beautiful breed of horses indigenous to the Mavari desert and grasslands that can go an extraordinary length of time without the need for water.
Inspirations: Arabian
Scarab
Description: A giant beetle that lives in the Mavari desert. It has incredibly strong mandibles, a tough armored shell, and the ability to recover from nearly any injury.
Inspirations: scarab beetle
Trylobite
Description: A large marine arthropod with poisonous jaws that often beaches on Mavarian shores.
Inspirations: trilobite
Borill
Description: A large, very temperamental and dangerous bird with a brightly colored beak that inhabits Nendwa Forest.
Inspirations: toucan, cassowary
Direwolf
Description: A large, sentient, and highly intelligent breed of wolf native to Nendwa forest. They have a pact of friendship and brotherhood with the Mako people.
Inspirations: dire wolf
Hyloth
Description: A distant cousin to the sloth with a hulking bear-like body, long limbs, a stout tail, and massive claws that can cleave a man in two with a single swipe.
Inspirations: giant sloth
Malfrog
Description: A small, but dangerous frog with poison-coated skin that is usually fatal. It can be found both in the deeper reaches of Nendwa Forest and in Urswamp.
Inspirations: poison dart frog
Quillin
Description: A tiger-like animal with iridescent scales and swept-back antlers. They are elusive, cunning, and adept at stealth, able to appear and vanish at will. Distant relative of the gargon.
Inspirations: qilin, tiger, chesire cat
Smilodon
Description: A breed of large jungle cat distinguished by their stocky body, vicious temperament, and extremely large canine teeth.
Inspirations: saber-tooth cat
Description: A large, very temperamental and dangerous bird with a brightly colored beak that inhabits Nendwa Forest.
Inspirations: toucan, cassowary
Direwolf
Description: A large, sentient, and highly intelligent breed of wolf native to Nendwa forest. They have a pact of friendship and brotherhood with the Mako people.
Inspirations: dire wolf
Hyloth
Description: A distant cousin to the sloth with a hulking bear-like body, long limbs, a stout tail, and massive claws that can cleave a man in two with a single swipe.
Inspirations: giant sloth
Malfrog
Description: A small, but dangerous frog with poison-coated skin that is usually fatal. It can be found both in the deeper reaches of Nendwa Forest and in Urswamp.
Inspirations: poison dart frog
Quillin
Description: A tiger-like animal with iridescent scales and swept-back antlers. They are elusive, cunning, and adept at stealth, able to appear and vanish at will. Distant relative of the gargon.
Inspirations: qilin, tiger, chesire cat
Smilodon
Description: A breed of large jungle cat distinguished by their stocky body, vicious temperament, and extremely large canine teeth.
Inspirations: saber-tooth cat
Basilisk ("sailback")
Description: A large predatory lizard, named for the ribbed sail that adorns its back, that inhabits the marshes and scrublands of Urthrak.
Inspirations: dimetrodon
Creeper
Description: A giant, centipede-like creature that inhabits the Urswamp. It has a tough armor-plated shell that comes in muted tones of red, brown, green, and black along with powerful pincers that can deliver a crushing and venomous bite. Its diet is omnivorous. The Mist harvest its armor to use as their own.
Inspirations: arthropleura
Lurker
Description: An giant amphibian predator of Urswamp with a streamlined body, powerful tail, and gaping jaws. Its mucous-slick skin can range from muted tones to a sickly white color. Its main source of food is fish, but it will snatch whatever comes to the water's edge.
Inspirations: loxomma, eogyrinus
Salamander
Description: A large amphibian of Urswamp with brightly colored skin thickly coated in toxic mucous. It has the ability to spit burning, acidic poison that is almost always fatal and is extremely dangerous. Relative of the lurker.
Inspirations: salamander
Description: A large predatory lizard, named for the ribbed sail that adorns its back, that inhabits the marshes and scrublands of Urthrak.
Inspirations: dimetrodon
Creeper
Description: A giant, centipede-like creature that inhabits the Urswamp. It has a tough armor-plated shell that comes in muted tones of red, brown, green, and black along with powerful pincers that can deliver a crushing and venomous bite. Its diet is omnivorous. The Mist harvest its armor to use as their own.
Inspirations: arthropleura
Lurker
Description: An giant amphibian predator of Urswamp with a streamlined body, powerful tail, and gaping jaws. Its mucous-slick skin can range from muted tones to a sickly white color. Its main source of food is fish, but it will snatch whatever comes to the water's edge.
Inspirations: loxomma, eogyrinus
Salamander
Description: A large amphibian of Urswamp with brightly colored skin thickly coated in toxic mucous. It has the ability to spit burning, acidic poison that is almost always fatal and is extremely dangerous. Relative of the lurker.
Inspirations: salamander
Btw, the Temeth Sea is the body of water that lies between the mainland and the two off-lands: Haldor and Urthrak. You don't get to the Falden Ocean proper until you go beyond those two. It's not labeled because that version of the map is a couple days out of date.
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