Foxkeyes
Minstrel
I'm working on a new idea and I have the basic plot planned. who they major characters are and who the opposing force are. I am having a little problem in deciding on the special magical powers the main characters have and it's central to the story.
In the story there is a priesthood that believe that one day a person with this form of magic will be their destruction so through out the years they have been on the look out for anyone like that.
A some of the priests have magical abilities and know what they are to expect when it comes to this person and the power he/she possesses. What I can't make my mind on is the power this person possesses, it has to be something that creates this fear in the priest so I guess it has to be powerful magic. Something that could threaten their whole existence.
I know that this is very vague but I would love some ideas to what this power could be.
Instead of just creating some powerful magic, you could increase the drama by finding the origin of the magic.
Perhaps this magic is something that combines an attack on their religion with a physical attack on the priests.
If you create a bit of history behind the religious order, it may reveal some weaknesses that can be exploited to undermine them. You could build a 'custom' magic power around that weakness. And perhaps the 'one' that is born with the 'power' can be connected to the priests' history. Initially the 'one' is unaware of what their power can do. But when the priests come after them, and the 'one' is forced to use their power to defend themselves, the character realises just how special a power they have. Not only can they defeat the pursuing priests, but they can destroy the entire religion.
The twist is: by initially pursuing the character, the priests inadvertently alert the 'one' to their special power, and doom themselves.