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Mama

SeverinR

Vala
took my daughters to Mama.

It was very well done.
Not the typical horror ghost story.
Did not see a whole lot of cliche, some good suspense.

And without giving away the ending, it is not the typical happily ever after nor the everyone dies in a blood bath.


Problems I noticed:
girls playing late at night, girlfriend to girls uncle somes in and tells them to go back to bed but window and room is bright as day.
 
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