Hi Scribes!
So, I sent my mother the first two chapters of my book I'm rewriting. I was really nervous. Firstly, because the book is stuffed full of questionably tasteful content. Prostitutes, drugs, a poker game, debauchery in every form. And that's just chapter one. And the language is stuff I don't say in real life, and I've got something of a colorful vocabulary in that way...
I've been writing since 2001, and I didn't even TELL my family that I wrote at all, until 2013. Only my mom new. And I basically had to tell her because I made a Facebook author page...and I mean, she's not dumb...so it was tell her about it and ask her to like the page, or try to keep it a secret like the guinea pig I kept in my closet for three days because she said I couldn't have it.
Anyways, so I have talked to her a little about writing and why I do it and stuff, but it was all sort of surface stuff. I didn't get into the specifics, like I do with my writer friends. But she commented once on a Facebook post, where I quoted part of a scene, and she said she loved it, and that my passage felt like it was a "real book". I smiled. "Yeah, Mom," I said. "That's my goal. I'm a real writer...been doing it a long time."
So after a couple conversations, we somehow established that she'd like to have a look at something.
Whoa. OMG. What to send?!?!?
Do I send her something cute and light-hearted? I have a couple shorts that fit the bill.
Do I send a psychological sort of story, set in the real world? I mean, just so it isn't an investment of her time, having to learn a fantasy setting?
I didn't know what to do. I sent her a grab bag of short stories, I believe. Sort of one from each category. Cute, clever, weird, and funny.
I asked if she wanted to read a novel, though, and she said that a novel interested her much more than short stories (which she still hasn't read). Well, okay, then.
I sent her the opening of my novel with the coarse language...and I only warned her about it like twice, once privately, and once publicly, on Facebook. HA!
Have any of you folks showed your work to you parents?
What did they say? Were they supportive? Did they give critique at all?
Well, i didn't know what to expect, but I'd already apologized in advance for the use of the c-word and some other stuff I felt wasn't mom-impressing. And I just sent it. F*** it, right? I'm 35...my mom's 55...we're beyond keeping secrets. In fact, it was a really revealing and honest conversation that began this whole thing. We had a phone call where we really tore some bandaids off old wounds, things from 20 years ago. And it was GOOD.
Anyways, so I sent her my first chapter, which comes in at 12k words (broken into 5 parts) and she emailed me at 8:30 pm to tell me she was beginning the reading. I wished her luck, apologized again for the foul language and sexual content, and told her not to rush, because she's a "slow reader".
Well, she emailed me back at 11:30 to tell me how much she enjoyed the chapter. And I was like, "Um...did you...finish it already? Wait. Did the thing I sent you have five parts? It should have five parts. Maybe I sent just part of it."
HA! Nope. She finished all 12k words in three hours and said she just couldn't put it down.
Wow. Thanks, mom. That made me feel warm and fuzzy. You know, after the confusion wore off.
So I just sent her the second chapter, another 10k words, and here was what she said:
I'm just so touched. I never expected to show my work to my mom, let alone have her actually enjoy it. This has been a very special week for me, because just a few months ago, I was ready to throw in the towel and abandon all hope of ever getting my shit together and actually writing something good. Right now, I have a hugely supportive crit group that pushes me and holds me to the highest standard, and friends here who share this journey (for richer or poorer, on good days and on bad, HA!), and my mom is now a fan. And my husband is just the most supportive person in the world, and he believes in me when I never believe in myself.
This experience has been so much better than I ever hoped for. In a way, I'm sad I was too scared to share this part of my life with my mother before. I was terrified. In fact...I don't think I could EVER tell my dad I write. I mean, it was his bookshelf that inspired my love of reading fantasy. He bought all those books that made me laugh and cry and feel. He's a super intense reader, and I'm sure he'd HATE everything about my writing. But at least Mom is entertained. That's a huge victory for me, and it's boosted my confidence so much.
Thanks for letting me share this really weird experience with you all. I'd love to hear about how you shared your work with your parents or spouse. And if you haven't, what are you waiting for?
Best wishes, all. Keep being you, because when you do, people notice.
So, I sent my mother the first two chapters of my book I'm rewriting. I was really nervous. Firstly, because the book is stuffed full of questionably tasteful content. Prostitutes, drugs, a poker game, debauchery in every form. And that's just chapter one. And the language is stuff I don't say in real life, and I've got something of a colorful vocabulary in that way...
I've been writing since 2001, and I didn't even TELL my family that I wrote at all, until 2013. Only my mom new. And I basically had to tell her because I made a Facebook author page...and I mean, she's not dumb...so it was tell her about it and ask her to like the page, or try to keep it a secret like the guinea pig I kept in my closet for three days because she said I couldn't have it.
Anyways, so I have talked to her a little about writing and why I do it and stuff, but it was all sort of surface stuff. I didn't get into the specifics, like I do with my writer friends. But she commented once on a Facebook post, where I quoted part of a scene, and she said she loved it, and that my passage felt like it was a "real book". I smiled. "Yeah, Mom," I said. "That's my goal. I'm a real writer...been doing it a long time."
So after a couple conversations, we somehow established that she'd like to have a look at something.
Whoa. OMG. What to send?!?!?
Do I send her something cute and light-hearted? I have a couple shorts that fit the bill.
Do I send a psychological sort of story, set in the real world? I mean, just so it isn't an investment of her time, having to learn a fantasy setting?
I didn't know what to do. I sent her a grab bag of short stories, I believe. Sort of one from each category. Cute, clever, weird, and funny.
I asked if she wanted to read a novel, though, and she said that a novel interested her much more than short stories (which she still hasn't read). Well, okay, then.
I sent her the opening of my novel with the coarse language...and I only warned her about it like twice, once privately, and once publicly, on Facebook. HA!
Have any of you folks showed your work to you parents?
What did they say? Were they supportive? Did they give critique at all?
Well, i didn't know what to expect, but I'd already apologized in advance for the use of the c-word and some other stuff I felt wasn't mom-impressing. And I just sent it. F*** it, right? I'm 35...my mom's 55...we're beyond keeping secrets. In fact, it was a really revealing and honest conversation that began this whole thing. We had a phone call where we really tore some bandaids off old wounds, things from 20 years ago. And it was GOOD.
Anyways, so I sent her my first chapter, which comes in at 12k words (broken into 5 parts) and she emailed me at 8:30 pm to tell me she was beginning the reading. I wished her luck, apologized again for the foul language and sexual content, and told her not to rush, because she's a "slow reader".
Well, she emailed me back at 11:30 to tell me how much she enjoyed the chapter. And I was like, "Um...did you...finish it already? Wait. Did the thing I sent you have five parts? It should have five parts. Maybe I sent just part of it."
HA! Nope. She finished all 12k words in three hours and said she just couldn't put it down.
Wow. Thanks, mom. That made me feel warm and fuzzy. You know, after the confusion wore off.
So I just sent her the second chapter, another 10k words, and here was what she said:
Loved it! I can't wait to hear more about her magical talent. It reads well. This book is definitely holding my interest. Yes, I read this section tonight. When I get started I don't want to quit. I keep wanting to find out more.....what is going to happen next. I think you have a winner!
Mom
I'm just so touched. I never expected to show my work to my mom, let alone have her actually enjoy it. This has been a very special week for me, because just a few months ago, I was ready to throw in the towel and abandon all hope of ever getting my shit together and actually writing something good. Right now, I have a hugely supportive crit group that pushes me and holds me to the highest standard, and friends here who share this journey (for richer or poorer, on good days and on bad, HA!), and my mom is now a fan. And my husband is just the most supportive person in the world, and he believes in me when I never believe in myself.
This experience has been so much better than I ever hoped for. In a way, I'm sad I was too scared to share this part of my life with my mother before. I was terrified. In fact...I don't think I could EVER tell my dad I write. I mean, it was his bookshelf that inspired my love of reading fantasy. He bought all those books that made me laugh and cry and feel. He's a super intense reader, and I'm sure he'd HATE everything about my writing. But at least Mom is entertained. That's a huge victory for me, and it's boosted my confidence so much.
Thanks for letting me share this really weird experience with you all. I'd love to hear about how you shared your work with your parents or spouse. And if you haven't, what are you waiting for?
Best wishes, all. Keep being you, because when you do, people notice.