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DragonOfTheAerie
Vala
Unless going into detail for those two childbirth scenes is really going to be that important to the plot, I don't really see why you have to know so much about childbirth. Do those scenes have to be drawn out? Is it important that your MC experiences them deeply and intimately (unless it's her giving birth either time, then my advice here is useless)? Because personally I don't think it'll be necessary to go into extreme detail over two childbirth scenes. Just describe in general what's happening; there's no need for the gritty details. Obviously I don't know the importance of the children being born but the aftermath seems like it'd be more important.
Also, I like your four stages of research.
In one scene, it's the MC's (or, one of the MC's) wife who's giving birth; in the other, it's a more minor character. I suppose a ton of detail isn't necessary, but then again i don't want to get anything wrong.