Ireth
Myth Weaver
I'm having a lot of trouble with planning the climax of my WIP. The scene is very chaotic, with lots of things happening at more or less the same time in the span of a few minutes. For demonstration's sake, here's a list of the things that will happen (unless the plot changes before I reach that point):
There is more that happens afterward, of course, but it's irrelevant to the specific things I'm dealing with. Point six is the main thing I need to figure out. My biggest issue is with the perspective of the characters. I only want to have one character's POV on the scene, but he (or possibly she) couldn't possibly notice everything that's going on. The viewpoint character options are: Ariel, Vincent, or Dom. Gweneth/Meabh is not a viewpoint character at any point, as she only shows up partway through the book, and five POVs are more than I want to try to handle; and I'm a little leery of having Loegaire be a viewpoint character here, since he's going to die.
1) Protagonists Ariel, Vincent, Dom, Loegaire, and Gweneth meet up with antagonists Finvarra and Madoc and their servants. Also present is a unicorn.
2) Finvarra and Madoc reprimand Ariel and co. for failing in the quest Finvarra and Madoc set them on (to find Madoc's fugitive daughter Meabh), and consider their punishment.
3) Gweneth inadvertently reveals her true identity -- she is Meabh in disguise. The others are all shocked.
4) Madoc demands that Meabh be handed over to him; Ariel and co. refuse his demand and protect Meabh, as she is their friend.
5) Madoc tries to hold Ariel as a hostage, wanting to exchange her freedom for Meabh's.
6) Chaos ensues, and the following all happens at pretty much the same time: Ariel defends herself against Madoc; Vincent and co. rush to help Ariel, while Madoc's servants rush to help him. (Finvarra and his servants stand aside.) Madoc is maimed, and Dom and Loegaire are both gravely injured. Madoc's servants apprehend Meabh. Loegaire is momentarily forgotten in the chaos, and Vincent and Ariel both focus on Dom. At Vincent's plea, the unicorn steps in and heals Dom's wound with its horn, saving his life. (Hopefully not a Deus ex Machina, as minor healings by other unicorns are shown earlier in the novel, and this particular unicorn is not there at random.)
7) Ariel at last notices Loegaire and rushes to help him, but it is too late: he is dead.
2) Finvarra and Madoc reprimand Ariel and co. for failing in the quest Finvarra and Madoc set them on (to find Madoc's fugitive daughter Meabh), and consider their punishment.
3) Gweneth inadvertently reveals her true identity -- she is Meabh in disguise. The others are all shocked.
4) Madoc demands that Meabh be handed over to him; Ariel and co. refuse his demand and protect Meabh, as she is their friend.
5) Madoc tries to hold Ariel as a hostage, wanting to exchange her freedom for Meabh's.
6) Chaos ensues, and the following all happens at pretty much the same time: Ariel defends herself against Madoc; Vincent and co. rush to help Ariel, while Madoc's servants rush to help him. (Finvarra and his servants stand aside.) Madoc is maimed, and Dom and Loegaire are both gravely injured. Madoc's servants apprehend Meabh. Loegaire is momentarily forgotten in the chaos, and Vincent and Ariel both focus on Dom. At Vincent's plea, the unicorn steps in and heals Dom's wound with its horn, saving his life. (Hopefully not a Deus ex Machina, as minor healings by other unicorns are shown earlier in the novel, and this particular unicorn is not there at random.)
7) Ariel at last notices Loegaire and rushes to help him, but it is too late: he is dead.
There is more that happens afterward, of course, but it's irrelevant to the specific things I'm dealing with. Point six is the main thing I need to figure out. My biggest issue is with the perspective of the characters. I only want to have one character's POV on the scene, but he (or possibly she) couldn't possibly notice everything that's going on. The viewpoint character options are: Ariel, Vincent, or Dom. Gweneth/Meabh is not a viewpoint character at any point, as she only shows up partway through the book, and five POVs are more than I want to try to handle; and I'm a little leery of having Loegaire be a viewpoint character here, since he's going to die.