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Ireth
Myth Weaver
Try looking at the rescuers from your POV's encounters with them. If he hasn't seen them, ever, before the rescue, how do they first interact/react in that moment. Does one of them fire a warning shot into his favorite pillow? Call him a name? There you have "Jerk" and "Potty Mouth".
Maybe he can learn their names, real or nick names, if the hostage calls at them.
He's seen the elves exactly once before, and the humans not at all. The POV character was too busy freaking out over his dying friend to pay much attention to the elves besides Vidar, who was the first one to come forward and help. Vidar is also the one who, in this scene, fires a warning shot and earns the nickname "coward"; that's the point I'm stuck at. Also, if the hostage isn't unconscious by the time the rescuers get there (depending on what I do in the next draft), he'll almost certainly be gagged after the POV character is done ranting at him and listening to his "excuses".