1. Mar 29, 2015 #1
   

   Antaus Minstrel

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   World of Risadum <-- (Hint, click here)
   
   I'm posting this because I would appreciate some feedback on the information posted here. I'm still working on world development and anything a person feels like contributing would be appreciated. This is the first time I've ever tried to flesh out a setting in such detail and I'm not 100% sure how to proceed. Someone doesn't need to respond to he whole thing, whatever someone would like to talk about.

    
2. Mar 29, 2015 #2
   

   Fyle Inkling

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   Pretty sure this should be in the showcase section.
   
   Or, try to find a critique partner to swap with！
   
   They are around, I have a few from this forum.

    

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