evanator66
Minstrel
I am currently working on a story of indeterminate length, set in a universe I have already created. I wanted to write a story that was a phyrric victory (not one of the 'supporting protagonist died' kind, I mean the 'cataclysmic/world-shattering event that wipes out millions'), so I decided to have the protagonists fail to disarm the superweapon they were sent to deactivate, but instead cause it to misfire, splitting the world in half. What do you think of this idea? Is there anything I can do (in your opinion) to improve it?