Ahoy,
I'm currently editing the first draft of my WIP to make it ready for beta readers. Over the last few weeks I've picked out a few paragraphs from the sections I've been editing, and I've shared them on my facebook page for friends and family to see.
I've picked paragraphs that don't include any spoilers, but that still showcase a bit of the attitude of the story. Even taken out of context, they're amusing on their own and can tickle a potential reader's imagination.
I don't have any tangible evidence for how well this is working, but I have a vague feeling it may make others interested in giving the story a chance and I'm hoping it will make it a little easier for me to find beta readers.
Have you tried something similar, and what was your experience with it? Was it good or was it bad?
For reference, here are two recent snapshots:
I had a few others as well, but I'm not finding them at the moment.
Basically, the idea is to show off some cool situations of the story, pretty much like stills from a movie or sceenshots from a game.
I'm currently editing the first draft of my WIP to make it ready for beta readers. Over the last few weeks I've picked out a few paragraphs from the sections I've been editing, and I've shared them on my facebook page for friends and family to see.
I've picked paragraphs that don't include any spoilers, but that still showcase a bit of the attitude of the story. Even taken out of context, they're amusing on their own and can tickle a potential reader's imagination.
I don't have any tangible evidence for how well this is working, but I have a vague feeling it may make others interested in giving the story a chance and I'm hoping it will make it a little easier for me to find beta readers.
Have you tried something similar, and what was your experience with it? Was it good or was it bad?
For reference, here are two recent snapshots:
Otter stuck out his tongue at him and then laughed his silent laugh again.
Enar spluttered. The words didn't want to come out right - not that he had any idea what to say. He'd never had a holy man throwing bread at him before. His thoughts ran in all directions at once and not a one of them stayed still. In the end he just crossed his arms and pouted.
Sure, it was embarrassing, but it was also kind of funny. Somewhere on the inside, a small part of him laughed its ass off at the rest of him.
“Well, yeah, except I didn't get away quite that easily...” Another big sigh. “I had to get one of the monks to shave my hair into a mohawk and enchant it to glow green.”
“Wow, really? That sounds a bit extreme.”
“Yeah, no kidding. Have you ever tried to sleep while your hair glows bright enough to read by?”
I had a few others as well, but I'm not finding them at the moment.
Basically, the idea is to show off some cool situations of the story, pretty much like stills from a movie or sceenshots from a game.