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the greatest heroes that my fantasy world ever knew(from the inhabitants perspectives).

thatoneguywho-

Troubadour
Liya (unknown)

The first hero that this world ever knew, her surname is lost to time. she exponentially expanded humanity's potential, and drove the divine away after a war.
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the Nameless Hero

their entire name has been lost. this hero killed a tyrant who would have conquered the world.
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the Tamer

this hero led the Elementals into a new age, and though the ability to tame a Saurae is lost due to so few left, he is revered for his advancements.

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Aujvo

a genius alchemist who kick-started an age of power.

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Arin Dilinouis

led humanity into the age of power. Everything we had at the time is lost and can never come back.

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Pharoie Wirisip

defeated Abai after she annihilated most of humanity and ended the age of power. he brought power back to the Elementals and saved humanity in a hopeless position. he disappeared after his battle.
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Arlikuy Heli

after Abai came back, Arlikuy swiftly defeated her in the most crushing defeat she ever had, and sealed her back within weeks of he return. he is alive.
 

pmmg

Myth Weaver
What does that mean, exponentially expanded humanity's potential?

I would just say, If I was to start listing all the heroes of Earth's history, I would find I could not really create a list that would include them all. The list above cannot be exhaustive.
 

thatoneguywho-

Troubadour
What does that mean, exponentially expanded humanity's potential?

I would just say, If I was to start listing all the heroes of Earth's history, I would find I could not really create a list that would include them all. The list above cannot be exhaustive.
basically expanded human territory, smarts, life, stuff like that.

these are the GREATEST heroes, not the HEROES
 

SamazonE

Troubadour
It sounds like the plot of Shadow of the Colossus, which had sequels, prequels, remakes, basically everything that peels like Star Wars. There are bits which I think could make improvements, like the general determination and downfall from the first to the last. If it begins, where does it end? Were we making some comments in chat, about certain archetypes becoming over-run by the Disney machine, what machine is that? I’ve heard the actors in those movies needed to pass school in their tweens, just to qualify!
Aujvo

a genius alchemist who kick-started an age of power.
I like this one.
 

thatoneguywho-

Troubadour
I like this one.
thanks! Aujvo has really been in my head for a while lol. he and the tamer are actually from the same place, family, AND age, so they knew eachother. the only other heroes here from the same age as eachother are Arin and Pharoie, and they... were NOT friendly.
 
Might want to develop these characters more before you start writing them or about them. Some readers read for 'lore' and there's barely any here.

For one of my stories all the 'mythical legends' have names and different personalities, most of them are still alive, due to what makes them 'legendary' and a lot of them are mountains compared to the average mage of their type.
 

thatoneguywho-

Troubadour
Might want to develop these characters more before you start writing them or about them. Some readers read for 'lore' and there's barely any here.

For one of my stories all the 'mythical legends' have names and different personalities, most of them are still alive, due to what makes them 'legendary' and a lot of them are mountains compared to the average mage of their type.
this is really just a brief overview. trust me, I have LOTS of lore for these characters, and only the tamer and Aujvo have an unfinished story.
 
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