Hey guys, I'm finally settling in to write chapter 2 of my WIP after over a year (just too much going on). I wanted to get some feedback on a timing issues. I open the chapter with some individuals readying themselves to leave, originally I had planned for this part to be more involved and I'm not sure it wouldn't be better, but I decided against that. Instead, it's a short part of the very beginnings of the chapter and immediately after I am referencing other individuals who are part of the same party but due to waking up late, lol, they are hours behind the rest of the party. The transition tis sudden though, but I feel like the first part of the beginning of the chapter is too short to merrit it's own break in the chapter and then I can refer back to the second group members. The entire chapter either can be resolved or will have to face a major rewrite, it's only 5 pages thank God but do you think that timing is wierd? Let me say it again, the beginning is a page and then I change pov to the second group who is now hours behind and will be catching up to the first group, where I will have to change pov again. Of course there are some good parts to go in there alternative to another version of the chapter. The purpose of doing so was character building.