Trick
Auror
So, in my WIP the MC's mentor-type character just died. He's on his way to exact revenge on the one who betrayed the mentor and he will do exactly that. However, once he returns home (I'm thinking it'll be about two days after the mentor's death) he will find his mother dead, brutalized quite terribly, and his little sister will be physically unharmed but very much so psychologically damaged, to the point she has gone catatonic.
This will send him into a downward spiral that ends in prison.
Are these tragedies too close together or is this just fast pacing?
This will send him into a downward spiral that ends in prison.
Are these tragedies too close together or is this just fast pacing?