Jabrosky
Banned
Before I begin, let me sketch out my core concept:
There is a river valley bisecting a desert which houses two fundamentally different cultures, one in the river's marshy delta and the other further upriver. The delta culture is populated by tawny Middle Eastern-type people (the Moonchildren) who worship a Moon God whereas the upriver culture has black people )the Sunchildren) whose deity is a Sun Goddess. At one point in history, the Sun culture conquered the Moon culture, unifying the river valley into a single kingdom (known as the Two Lands), and married the Sun Goddess to the Moon God. However, this "marriage" has since broken up due to dynastic decay, and the Sun and Moon kingdoms are at war again.
Enter the heroine Ouggiri, a Sun princess who fights for her aging father King Ajala. Her goal is to bring the Two Lands back under Sun control, a task she has inherited from her ancestors since the split. Her main antagonist will be Amelon, a prince of the Moonchildren who also fights for an aging parent, in his case his mother Queen Salome.
Neither the Sun nor Moon kingdoms are alone in the world; both have to recruit allies from neighboring polities. Here the Moonchildren have the upper hand, for Amelon has managed to court the mighty Thunderchildren across the sea to his favor. Ouggiri will have to figure out how to counter such a strong force, and then there is her lingering doubt that the war she fights is even justified...
Actually, that last clause brings to mind one of my challenges: I want the story to be a rather "gray" one, meaning that neither the Moonchildren nor the Sunchildren are more justified or morally superior to each other; it's not a simplistic "good guys vs bad guys" story. However, when I first conceived of this idea, I expected to tell it from Ouggiri's perspective, which would bias the story in her favor. Now I'm considering telling it with alternating PoVs, with Ouggiri as the protagonist for half the chapters and Amelon for the other half. In such a scenario, each protagonist would also be an antagonist. Could such an even-handed approach work, or do I need to pick a side in this dispute?
There is a river valley bisecting a desert which houses two fundamentally different cultures, one in the river's marshy delta and the other further upriver. The delta culture is populated by tawny Middle Eastern-type people (the Moonchildren) who worship a Moon God whereas the upriver culture has black people )the Sunchildren) whose deity is a Sun Goddess. At one point in history, the Sun culture conquered the Moon culture, unifying the river valley into a single kingdom (known as the Two Lands), and married the Sun Goddess to the Moon God. However, this "marriage" has since broken up due to dynastic decay, and the Sun and Moon kingdoms are at war again.
Enter the heroine Ouggiri, a Sun princess who fights for her aging father King Ajala. Her goal is to bring the Two Lands back under Sun control, a task she has inherited from her ancestors since the split. Her main antagonist will be Amelon, a prince of the Moonchildren who also fights for an aging parent, in his case his mother Queen Salome.
Neither the Sun nor Moon kingdoms are alone in the world; both have to recruit allies from neighboring polities. Here the Moonchildren have the upper hand, for Amelon has managed to court the mighty Thunderchildren across the sea to his favor. Ouggiri will have to figure out how to counter such a strong force, and then there is her lingering doubt that the war she fights is even justified...
Actually, that last clause brings to mind one of my challenges: I want the story to be a rather "gray" one, meaning that neither the Moonchildren nor the Sunchildren are more justified or morally superior to each other; it's not a simplistic "good guys vs bad guys" story. However, when I first conceived of this idea, I expected to tell it from Ouggiri's perspective, which would bias the story in her favor. Now I'm considering telling it with alternating PoVs, with Ouggiri as the protagonist for half the chapters and Amelon for the other half. In such a scenario, each protagonist would also be an antagonist. Could such an even-handed approach work, or do I need to pick a side in this dispute?