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What are your pet peeves as a reader?

Discussion in 'Novels & Stories' started by Black Dragon, Feb 6, 2019.

  1. Toby Johnson

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    when a writer compares something in the book to something from the real world. 'his teeth were like corn flakes'. this just annoys me as i see it as lazy writing in fantasy. compare it to something that you put more than two seconds of thought into.
     
  2. S.T. Ockenner

    S.T. Ockenner Istar

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    he barked.
     
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