What are your pet peeves as a reader?

[Toby Johnson]

when a writer compares something in the book to something from the real world. 'his teeth were like corn flakes'. this just annoys me as i see it as lazy writing in fantasy. compare it to something that you put more than two seconds of thought into.

 

[S.T. Ockenner]

I still don't think I'd put the book down because of that, but gosh golly it was annoying. Woof.

he barked.