sashamerideth
Banned
My narrating character is telling the story of a young guy that discovers a magic ability, and falls to "evil" but is redeemed by former friends and lover.
I am debating how early to introduce the magic he can control. I have others with clear abilities from the start, and a hint at what my teenager can do, but the scope of what he can do, I don't know how gradual to reveal it. I want him to learn and as he learns more, he falls further to darkness, but from when? At this rate, he won't be in the valley until 3/4 through my story, how do you deal with introductions to magic systems?
I am debating how early to introduce the magic he can control. I have others with clear abilities from the start, and a hint at what my teenager can do, but the scope of what he can do, I don't know how gradual to reveal it. I want him to learn and as he learns more, he falls further to darkness, but from when? At this rate, he won't be in the valley until 3/4 through my story, how do you deal with introductions to magic systems?