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Where did the moon come from?

lucseon

Acolyte
Long ago, before the seas remembered their shores and before the sky had learned the names of stars, there lived a scarab beetle beneath the burning dunes of the ancient desert.
The beetle was small as a thumbprint, black as obsidian, and patient beyond measure. Each dawn it rolled a tiny sphere of strange shimmering dust the color of sunlight trapped in metal — monoatomic gold, scattered across the sands by forgotten gods.
The other creatures laughed.
“You will never finish,” hissed the desert snakes.
“It is only dust,” croaked the lizards.
But the scarab said nothing. Each day it rolled another layer upon the sphere. Across dunes. Across dry riverbeds. Across the skeletons of ancient forests buried beneath the sands.
Years became centuries.
The ball grew larger than a house.
Then larger than a mountain.
At last it shone so brightly that the night itself turned pale around it. Travelers crossing the desert thought a second sun had fallen to Earth.
Yet the world was changing.
The winds cooled.
The rains vanished.
A great frost crept down from the north like white fingers across the lands. The scarab, still pushing its golden sphere, climbed higher and higher into the freezing wastes until snow buried the deserts entirely.
There, beneath glaciers taller than kingdoms, the great ball slept.
The scarab curled beside it and entered a dreamless silence.
For thousands of years the Earth remained locked in ice.
Then came the thaw.
Fire returned to the mountains. Rivers awoke beneath the glaciers. The ancient golden sphere, warmed by the returning sun, began to hum with a sound too deep for human ears.
The monoatomic gold remembered the heavens from which it first came.
The frozen shell cracked.
Light spilled through the ice.
The scarab awakened.
Slowly, impossibly, the immense sphere rose from the Earth. Snow and stone fell away from it like crumbs. The oceans trembled. Forests bent toward the sky.
Higher and higher the sphere floated, carrying the scarab upon its glowing surface.
The creatures of the new world watched in silence as the golden orb ascended beyond the clouds and into the dark sea above.
There it cooled and silvered with age.
There it became the Moon.
And if you look carefully on certain nights, when the moon hangs low and golden on the horizon, some say you can still see the shadow of a tiny scarab endlessly rolling the world onward through the stars.
 

Genly

Sage
Is the moon a ball of monotonic gold super called by space's vacuum levitated by earth's magnetic field?
Sorry, what?

The usual theory about the Moon's origins is that it was caused by a giant impact, when a former Mars-sized planet that no longer exists hit the Earth in a grazing collision, thereby creating a field of debris that eventually coalesced into the Moon.

Now, of course, in a fantasy world, pretty much any alternative explanation is possible, provided that it is internally consistent within the rules of that world. I do like your story, but I'm still baffled about what you are actually asking here.
 

lucseon

Acolyte
Sorry, what?

The usual theory about the Moon's origins is that it was caused by a giant impact, when a former Mars-sized planet that no longer exists hit the Earth in a grazing collision, thereby creating a field of debris that eventually coalesced into the Moon.

Now, of course, in a fantasy world, pretty much any alternative explanation is possible, provided that it is internally consistent within the rules of that world. I do like your story, but I'm still baffled about what you are actually asking here.
It's a take on Egyption myth I wrote with the help of chat gbt
 

Genly

Sage
You butter believe it's only a margarine-ly funny joke...


I mean you do you but I'd advise against using AI for any content in your story.
Good on you for putting your own 'take' on it but regardless.
Yeah, use of AI is an automatic reject for almost all paying markets for short stories. They really hate it.
 

Genly

Sage
Though that brings up a question, would name generators count as AI?
They aren't powered by LLM (as far as I know ? ) or if they are they aren't proper AI.
Probably not. That is a very minor use of computer technology. What the zines dislike is any significant part of the story or cover art being produced by AI.
 
Though that brings up a question, would name generators count as AI?
They aren't powered by LLM (as far as I know ? ) or if they are they aren't proper AI.
No, it wouldn't. Firstly, because calling a name generator an AI is really stretching the meaning to include everything done by a computer.

But also because there's no way for them to know. The issue isn't so much with it being AI generated as such. It's more to do with the quality of the work. AI written work is very average, middle of the road, and bland. There is also a lot of it. Anyone with a computer can go to a LLM and ask it to generate a 2.5k word story about X. These are then submitted because their idea is the best out there. Which overwhelms the submission pipeline for these small zines. Which is why they have the blanked ban.

But it's impossible for anyone to know if the name Arklblargh came from an AI or if you came up with that yourself or if you got it from a name generator. Nor does anyone care.
 
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