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In my WIP there are two men who are interested in the main character. Both of them have chemistry with her and separately both romances are believable and make sense.The problem is that both of them together comes off as a bit silly. I don't want to give the impression that men are just throwing themselves at her feet, because that's certainly not true. The whole thing's pretty central the her character development and also serves to move the plot forward so I need it.
Any tips on how to write love triangles that don't read like teenage melodrama?
Any tips on how to write love triangles that don't read like teenage melodrama?