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The Wound That Never Heals

The air was thick in the Echo, viscous as fog and bitter with the tang of mildew. Graciosa’s long strides, powerful yet unnervingly quiet, carried her deeper into the plane, her figure nearly swallowed by the dim shadows cast by skeletal trees and jagged rock formations. The land seemed to heave with a stifling breath, a vast presence caught in endless torment. Blackened soil clung to her boots, pulling with a sickening grip that almost seemed to resist her movements, as if the Echo itself were trying to swallow her.

This was no realm for the faint of heart, but Graciosa met its hostility with unflinching resolve. Her tail flicked with annoyance as the atmosphere pressed down upon her, every inch of it echoing a judgmental disdain. Here, her power was less tangible, caught in a web of twisted reflections, ancient insecurities lurking in the corner of her mind. Faces flickered at the edge of her vision—her own distorted, pale, wearing looks of suppressed agony, fury, and cold, snarling disdain.

With a sneer, Graciosa pressed on, her clawed hand wrapping tightly around the hilt of her blade. In this place, she felt a silent dare, a challenge beneath the realm’s pulse, as if it sought to lay bare her every flaw, every lingering doubt. The Echo was alive with murmurings—words hissing in languages long dead, carried on the wind and dripping from the branches like venom. Lies, they whispered, weakness. These words were not new to her, nor were they painful—she had stripped herself of such vulnerabilities long ago.

“Show me something worthy of fear, if you dare,” she muttered, voice dripping with contempt as she cast a sidelong glare at a reflection of herself, half-shrouded in darkness. Her mirrored image sneered back, a face twisted with hate, amber eyes hollow with the desolate rage of a buried self. Yet Graciosa met it without hesitation, reveling in the raw pulse of her own aggression; she could taste the bitterness of past slights, past betrayals, bubbling within her. This reflection sought to wound, but Graciosa’s gaze only sharpened.

The land around her began to writhe in response. The soil pulsed like a festering wound, and from it rose figures of those she had once vanquished, their faces twisted in anguish, their bodies broken but unyielding. Shadows loomed, grotesque and hauntingly familiar, past enemies clawing from the soil, teeth bared in silent screams. They approached, circling like predators, faces distorted by both fear and fury, hands outstretched as if to reclaim her.

But Graciosa did not flinch. She lifted her chin, let them approach, allowed their shadows to cast over her like a shroud. Her lips curled into a sardonic smile, her tail twitching in measured arrogance. "I am not beholden to you, to this place," she whispered, her voice a defiant hiss against the howling silence. She moved forward, her presence unsettling the phantasms, watching as their forms flickered, their power fading as her disdainful gaze bore into them.

The Echo reeled, its distorted mirror cracking beneath her relentless stride. Graciosa became a blade, cutting through the twisted projections, untouched by their whispers, unmoved by their attempts to unsettle. Here in the Echo, she became her own menace, her every step a declaration of dominance over the shadows she had already defeated within herself.

With each step, the Echo seemed to buckle under Graciosa’s presence, the ground beneath her quivering like the flesh of some immense creature. Tendrils of darkness recoiled from her touch, twisting and unfurling as if reluctant to yield. She felt the weight of it pressing against her, testing, desperate to expose fractures in her resolve. Yet her gaze remained steely, unfaltering, eyes narrowed in cold amusement as if mocking the plane’s attempts to unravel her.

Ahead, the landscape morphed, the shadows converging into a grotesque archway carved from sinew and bone. It pulsed like a heart, dripping with viscous black fluid, and beyond it, the air grew even thicker, clotted with an odor of rot and earth. Graciosa’s lips parted in a sardonic smile; she’d come to see what this place held, and it was not in her nature to turn back, no matter how the realm tried to unsettle her. She brushed a hand along the archway’s twisted edge, feeling the pulsing warmth beneath her fingers before stepping through without hesitation.

The corridor stretched before her, alive with unsettling sounds—a slithering hiss, the wet smack of something shifting in the darkness. Veins of crimson light pulsed within the walls, casting flickering shadows that contorted with each of her steps. Faces appeared in the walls now, twisted in expressions of terror and malice, eyes filled with a primal hate that stared out at her, accusing, pleading. They were reflections of herself, warped fragments dredged from the depths of her mind, memories twisted by the Echo’s strange alchemy.

One face sneered at her from the wall, its eyes burning with an ancient malice. “You are nothing without the pain you’ve left behind,” it spat, its voice like cracked glass. “Every life you’ve taken, every soul you’ve broken—did you think they would forget?”

Graciosa stopped, her gaze lingering on the face, her expression one of calm disdain. She leaned closer, her voice low and taunting. “Pain is a luxury,” she murmured. “One I left behind long ago. What use is remorse to a blade?”

The face twisted, writhing in response to her words, and the others nearby hissed in unison, their accusatory stares dimming, losing their edge as her indifference cut through them. She could almost feel the Echo recoiling, as if her confidence were poison spreading through its veins.

The corridor opened into a vast chamber; its ceiling lost in a miasma of shadows. Towering spires of twisted metal and flesh rose from the ground, their forms contorted into monstrous shapes that seemed to wail in silent agony. A throne stood at the center, hewn from the same writhing material, its edges jagged and glistening with some dark secretion. As Graciosa approached, the throne seemed to pulsate, an invitation, a dare, as though the realm itself were attempting to lure her into a position of false power.

Graciosa’s fingers traced the hilt of her blade as she considered the throne, her expression unreadable. She could sense the intent woven into its form, a subtle urge to bend, to subdue. It was a mockery of dominion, a false power crafted to ensnare those who sought control. But Graciosa’s ambitions ran deeper than illusions. She circled the throne slowly, her eyes narrowed in appraisal, her movements deliberate and unyielding, as though mocking the very idea that this place could control her.

Finally, she turned her back on the throne, her gaze fixed on the writhing shadows beyond. Her presence alone seemed to twist the chamber, the echoes of her resolve rippling outward, warping the grotesque spires and sullen faces embedded within the walls. She was not here to claim dominion; she was here to endure, to defy the Echo’s attempts to break her spirit.

A murmur rose from the shadows, a deep, guttural whisper that seemed to echo from the depths of the plane itself. “What are you, creature?” it asked, a voice reverberating like thunder across the chamber.

Graciosa tilted her head, a wicked smile curving her lips. “I am what you fear,” she answered, her voice a silken threat. She allowed the words to linger, her gaze piercing the darkness with an unwavering strength. “I am the reflection that will not cower. I am the wound that will not heal.”

And with those words, the Echo shuddered, its shadows seeming to retreat, to coil back as though her very presence had scorched it. In that moment, Graciosa became a figure of defiance, a force against which the Echo’s twisted reflections could find no purchase. She had not conquered the plane, nor bent it to her will—but she had endured it, without falter, without surrender, and that alone was enough to leave the Echo reeling in her wake.

This time, the shadows retreated. Graciosa knew they would return.

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