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Either way, I'd run with it and see how it works. I don't find it works so well as a metaphor, however, because I think the underlying assumption that men generally fear a woman being in control of reproduction is a flawed assumption. Probably true in a minority of cases, but not as a general rule, so if you try to extend the metaphor to make a generalized point (sort of a universal truth) I think it will fall on its face.
Well, maybe "fear" is the wrong word, but there's obviously been a nearly-universal effort to curtail and control female sexuality in male-dominated cultures. I actually can't even think of a counter-example.
It makes sense, of course--men are at risk of raising children who are not their own, and women are not. So men naturally fear cuckolding far more than women do. Men also happened to seize most positions of political and religious authority throughout history, and so leveraged those positions to control female sexuality to ensure as many consequences as possible for female promiscuity and infidelity, including insults, shunning, damnation, forced pregnancy, rape, and death.
Now, you're right in the sense that while almost every culture ever documented has created restrictions and rules around female sexuality (and male sexuality too, though generally far less restrictively), that does not mean that every individual man shares those feelings. For the record, I'm a man, and obviously I don't if I'm writing about how misguided they are. So you're right that I shouldn't paint all men with that brush, but I think it's fair to paint all cultures with that brush.