The Blue Lotus

The thirst for outside opinions would have bested you xD Every writer wishes for his/her work to be appreciated, and our stories always seem to have that positive look about them, until a critique proves us otherwise xD

I apologize in advance if my critique is too straight forward. It's just that I prefer constructive criticism over endless amounts of praise, as it really help us grow as writers.

Hey you are out of space for private messages, so my last two wouldn't go through

I have... :D But, I should check on them again asap. For now... off to the store. Blah.

thanks for the comments and advice! very much appreciated. :)