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  1. pmmg

    Culminating action

    After writing the long tale, you are coming to the end, and all those mighty conflicts are about to spiral around each other, and end climatically. But you have many characters, maybe five with POV's, and they are all about to have it out. You want the action to be quick paced, and keep the...
  2. Juljio

    Story

    5 years ago, bright beams of light fell all across the earth. Nobody knew what it was or where it came from. It sure freaked the majority of people out and some say it was the end of the world. But nothing much happened, and most people forgot about it soon enough. Within a year there was...
  3. J

    Please give me advice on my action adventure supernatural horror novel

    What do you think of my action adventure supernatural horror story novel? This story will be about a supernatural medieval German prince who is a great warrior as a knight. As a knight, he was one of the best martial artists and individual warriors for his time. He is an expert in a form of...
  4. Chapter Seventeen- Metal and Magic

    Chapter Seventeen- Metal and Magic

    Calda's house was in sight, and the three youths crouched to stay low. Naelen had a stern feeling in his gut as he creeped toward the house. "We should stay quiet," he warned. "Last time I made too much noise." Lila acknowledged him with a nod. "Where to, little brother?" He gestured to the...
  5. Chapter Sixteen- Blood and Snow Pt. 2

    Chapter Sixteen- Blood and Snow Pt. 2

    When Kallus woke up, he saw a pair of shiny blue eyes staring at him. For a moment he thought they were Lanara's eyes, but these were more gentle, carrying a hint of sorrow. "Calda?" Kallus touched his aching head, wincing at the sting. In Calda's hand was a glass vial. Her graceful arm reached...
  6. Chapter Sixteen- Blood and Snow Pt. 1

    Chapter Sixteen- Blood and Snow Pt. 1

    Naelen walked alongside his father. The ground was slushy beneath them as they traveled along the footpath. They were both carrying sacks of provisions with them, foods and goods alike. They were a kilometer away from home and hearth, and they both longed for the warmth of indoors. But Kallus...
  7. Chapter Fifteen- The Winter Feast

    Chapter Fifteen- The Winter Feast

    21 December It was a bright morning when Damien came downstairs. Glancing around, he saw the oak bannisters lined with garland. Lanara had placed strings of garland on every doorway, every entrance. "What is going on?" Damien asked. "Are we having guests?" Lanara was standing on a stool...
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