Anberith
Dreamer
In the beginning of my novel I have an event happening. A crypt in the lower levels of the palace blows open when a magical prison containing a very dangerous beast and his army fails. The crypt is mean to do this to warn people of what has happen and what they can expect as this beast and his army are free to roam the land. The warning is written on the walls inside this crypt. Inside the crypt there is also a magical hot spot so to speak, where people can gain magical powers to help them against this enemy, but there are consequence to using this power, if and when you use it, you will get addicted and in the end it will burn you out and kill you or possible change you into something else( this is only an idea for a consequence). They don't know the affects of this power in the beginning of the novel
There are a lot of holes in this plot and I need help to figure this out so I can move on with the story. The first few things I am having difficulty with are why is the hot spot there, who put it and what exactly are the magical powers that it holds. These are only simple questions that I have to make my mind on.
The more complex questions have to do with the characters, why would a king trust in this warning and what would make him make people most likely soldiers take in this power.
Would it make more sense to have the hot spots some where else and then how would they think of going out and looking for them.
This is a complete work in progress and I would love some output on this. Any suggestions and questions that could help are greatly appreciated.
There are a lot of holes in this plot and I need help to figure this out so I can move on with the story. The first few things I am having difficulty with are why is the hot spot there, who put it and what exactly are the magical powers that it holds. These are only simple questions that I have to make my mind on.
The more complex questions have to do with the characters, why would a king trust in this warning and what would make him make people most likely soldiers take in this power.
Would it make more sense to have the hot spots some where else and then how would they think of going out and looking for them.
This is a complete work in progress and I would love some output on this. Any suggestions and questions that could help are greatly appreciated.