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a list of journal entries made by Ana dilinouis, the former protector of Atos Aros

thatoneguywho-

Minstrel
I was researching through ancient texts of the first generations, a time when the creationists directly lived in the world. I recently found a vey rare text, supposedly written by one of the six creationists. If I didn’t think of this then that would have been my focus. Anyway. Due to this find, it is my belief that there was a sentience before the creationists. I do not have any idea what it could be yet, but I know for a fact that if I am correct, it watches humanity closely. -Ana, head of the atosa library, entry one-







If I think about recent events, it would seem that this life form is located in(this entry is crossed out)



I finally figured it out. This is a groundbreaking discovery, for it proves that my theory those years ago was actually correct. Now I need to present the evidence, I have no time to write anything. -Ana dilinouis, head librarian of the library of atos aros

The abyss, or other world, or whatever you call it, has always been a strange, unknown place. We do not where or why it exists, and only a select handful have ever gone in and lived. Yet, all of them have reported one specific thing, though there is never enough information to know what it is. The closest anyone has gotten to finding this out is seeing six, purple, glowing eyes, just watching them. people also kept hearing a disembodied feminine voice relentlessly telling them to leave. That voice has come to be known as the voice of the abyss. It is different from the voice of the goddess of death abailemjikulo, and, shrouded in mystery like this, there is no way we can find anything about that... thing.

-Ana dilinouis



New information has emerged. Fotia and her companions have just gotten back. There is much more important information, but I had to write this down first. They saw the six eyes again. But this time there was so much more detail. It was a Saurae . Likely the strangest one we've seen in billions of years...it had three heads. Was it birthed wrong? Is it infected? Did something corrupt it? Or... is it supposed to be like this... Is it a new species, pehaps? Anyway, I may be writing to myself, but this must be recorded. The saurae disappeared, and as it did, that strange voice the abyss spoke again, and said something very worrisome: if I ever see a human again , I will destroy that race. Now leave, never come back, and don't. Fight. My. Will. That is what the voice said. Anyway, it seems that celebration is in order. I should go.

Ana dilinouis is a character from my story who masterminded humanity's defence against Abai, goddess of death. she is a genius, and impacted history from many years, from learning how to use magic without being born in the elemental lands, to gaining the ten thousand year long lifespan that the elementals get.
 

SamazonE

Troubadour
It reminds me of Ender’s Game, with the thirds, and the bugger race. I haven’t read past Ender’s Shadow, but there are a collection of events that follow. It is mystery.

What would that sentience do? I have had thoughts about a darkness or a light. Is it a guy before that changes shade and perception?

I wonder about stuff like why do we have two sides to our brain and whether that mean there are two sides to life. And balance, being merely an illusion, or a result.

There is the question of hallucination, how real they are, being part of the mind or the soul.

The Saurae looks like a Metroid.
 

thatoneguywho-

Minstrel
It reminds me of Ender’s Game, with the thirds, and the bugger race. I haven’t read past Ender’s Shadow, but there are a collection of events that follow. It is mystery.

What would that sentience do? I have had thoughts about a darkness or a light. Is it a guy before that changes shade and perception?

I wonder about stuff like why do we have two sides to our brain and whether that mean there are two sides to life. And balance, being merely an illusion, or a result.

There is the question of hallucination, how real they are, being part of the mind or the soul.

The Saurae looks like a Metroid.
har har

she kind almost figured out a huge secret then pivoted and found out A DIFFERENT HUGE SECRET COMPLETELY BY ACCIDENT.

me no logik

oh its real

based off of the hydra lol



(keep in mind: Ana dilinouis figured out how to use magic when she wasn't born with it, rebuilt her family legacy from the ground up after her father gambled in all away, managed to live ten thousand years because she managed to use magic, saved the world like three times and wrote a journal that shaped the world heeeehehehehehe)
 
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SamazonE

Troubadour
How can you be born with magic anyway, and why is it inherited? Probably, the same formula over again. I thought it was pretty cut and dry. Nature is full of science, and those elements break free, painfully or dangerously. Magic is but an answer blowing in the wind.
 

thatoneguywho-

Minstrel
How can you be born with magic anyway, and why is it inherited? Probably, the same formula over again. I thought it was pretty cut and dry. Nature is full of science, and those elements break free, painfully or dangerously. Magic is but an answer blowing in the wind.
to use magic a person's body must overflow with that magic. there is a certain place in my world where magic flows basically everywhere so babies develop the magic in the womb. Ana kinda overwhelmed herself with magic in order to use it. it is pretty settled, yes.
 

pmmg

Myth Weaver
I am confused, why is some of it in italics and some in block text, it seems to be the same person quoting.

I am having trouble with the way creationists is used. Is this on a fantasy world or our own? I am dubious that there would be a time when creationists existed, and now they don't exist. Creationists exist in our world to this day. I am one of them. Further...
Anyway. Due to this find, it is my belief that there was a sentience before the creationists. I do not have any idea what it could be yet, but I know for a fact that if I am correct, it watches humanity closely.

This is what creationists believe. That there was a sentience, it created everything, and it watches us to this day. There may be some argument on what the sentience is, or if there is a sentience, but... It seems like she went through a lot of effort to get to where they started.

So, I hope that is explained in some way.



Other than that, I think it is mysterious and atmospheric. Sounds like an interesting character.
 

thatoneguywho-

Minstrel
I am confused, why is some of it in italics and some in block text, it seems to be the same person quoting.

I am having trouble with the way creationists is used. Is this on a fantasy world or our own? I am dubious that there would be a time when creationists existed, and now they don't exist. Creationists exist in our world to this day. I am one of them. Further...


This is what creationists believe. That there was a sentience, it created everything, and it watches us to this day. There may be some argument on what the sentience is, or if there is a sentience, but... It seems like she went through a lot of effort to get to where they started.

So, I hope that is explained in some way.



Other than that, I think it is mysterious and atmospheric. Sounds like an interesting character.
that was just formatting problems.

fantasy world, the creationist are really the main gods. I'll clear that up on the main post, sorry!

whatever the account she found was might never be revealed, so that is a mystery lol. and ye, she very much did.


hehe
 

thatoneguywho-

Minstrel
I was researching through ancient texts of the first generations, a time when the creationists directly lived in the world. I recently found a vey rare text, supposedly written by one of the six creationists. If I didn’t think of this then that would have been my focus. Anyway. Due to this find, it is my belief that there was a sentience before the creationists. I do not have any idea what it could be yet, but I know for a fact that if I am correct, it watches humanity closely. -Ana, head of the atosa library, entry one-







If I think about recent events, it would seem that this life form is located in(this entry is crossed out)



I finally figured it out. This is a groundbreaking discovery, for it proves that my theory those years ago was actually correct. Now I need to present the evidence, I have no time to write anything. -Ana dilinouis, head librarian of the library of atos aros

The abyss, or other world, or whatever you call it, has always been a strange, unknown place. We do not where or why it exists, and only a select handful have ever gone in and lived. Yet, all of them have reported one specific thing, though there is never enough information to know what it is. The closest anyone has gotten to finding this out is seeing six, purple, glowing eyes, just watching them. people also kept hearing a disembodied feminine voice relentlessly telling them to leave. That voice has come to be known as the voice of the abyss. It is different from the voice of the goddess of death abailemjikulo, and, shrouded in mystery like this, there is no way we can find anything about that... thing.

-Ana dilinouis



New information has emerged. Fotia and her companions have just gotten back. There is much more important information, but I had to write this down first. They saw the six eyes again. But this time there was so much more detail. It was a Saurae . Likely the strangest one we've seen in billions of years...it had three heads. Was it birthed wrong? Is it infected? Did something corrupt it? Or... is it supposed to be like this... Is it a new species, pehaps? Anyway, I may be writing to myself, but this must be recorded. The saurae disappeared, and as it did, that strange voice the abyss spoke again, and said something very worrisome: if I ever see a human again , I will destroy that race. Now leave, never come back, and don't. Fight. My. Will. That is what the voice said. Anyway, it seems that celebration is in order. I should go.

Ana dilinouis is a character from my story who masterminded humanity's defence against Abai, goddess of death. she is a genius, and impacted history from many years, from learning how to use magic without being born in the elemental lands, to gaining the ten thousand year long lifespan that the elementals get.
side note: creationists are the first gods
 

thatoneguywho-

Minstrel
Should they not be called creators instead?
well, they made the planet, not the universe(humans don't even know that though lol), and their powers were things what some humans could do too, so they were originally the creators, but since magic become mostly tricks some humans could do, the word changed to -ion-ists. plus, my fantasy world doesn't have a language from earth!
 
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