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I just put 'Empire: Capital' up for review on Authentic.

Did you figure out what was going on?

Are you planning to read 'Empire: Estate'?

Side note: some of the knights in 'Capital' appear in 'Labyrinth War.'

What do you mean by, did I figure out what is going on? As in, in the story of Empire Capital? I am still reading, closing in on the end. I am expecting something Cthulhu'ie to happen, but there is not a lot of space left. My guess is, I will not have an accurate guess, but maybe...


Is Estate the next one? I have done book 1, and this one is book 2.

I plan on sending you some of the corrections, as I did for the last one. I very much like your writing voice, but I feel there is room for improvement. I dont know at all what is going on. At the end, the characters from the first book are showing back up, Silam, Lu Pang...I suspect Lu Pang is the great antagonist of the tale. Something is coming that will pop him front and center. My guess might be, he is looking to replace the emperor somehow. But its a loose guess.

So far, the book has been a lot of, a day in the life of, for many characters. I like following peter and Tia, but I am not so much into Kyle (though he does seem to be one with a lot more capability than he gets credit for). But...Peter has lands, so now maybe something with He and Tia can happen. Though, if I am being honest, I am not sure I would want to marry any of these. Everyone is so sleazy, and no seem to feel any love for what they do...They just do things cause there is no better alternative. I hope Tia marries for love in the end.

 

[ThinkerX]

I am contemplating doing a straight Grammarly edit of the whole series at the end of the year.

Yes, 'Estate' is the next one. (Book 3.) It ends on a bit of a cliffhanger.

'Metropolis' = Book 4. 'Spiral' = Book 5. 'Judgment' = Book 6.