Incanus
Auror
Obviously consequences play a big part in any kind of fiction.
I think I’ve been wrongly making many of my story consequences implicit. And by that I mean that I assume the reader will understand the outcome of something based on how it’s been set up.
Here’s a sort of ridiculous example of what I mean by implicit consequences — I’m in the middle of a sword fight, taking place in the middle of a battle. My opponent is swinging his weapon at me. If I don’t block it, it may strike me. It might hit my left arm, making it more difficult for me to use it to block future attacks. Or it might wound my torso, causing me to bleed and lose energy, making me more susceptible to attack. But if I strike at my opponent, I could leave myself open to counterattack, etc, etc.
I didn’t do that very well, but the point is that many consequences are readily understood without a detailed explanation.
My question is: under what conditions should I be explaining consequences? And under which circumstances do I rely on the obvious?
I’m guessing that it should be explicit when it is something personal, something to do with an MC’s or other POV character’s story arc, something more nuanced. Things like that.
A related question: Is it possible to overdo explaining some consequences? Sort of like in the example above?
I think I’ve been wrongly making many of my story consequences implicit. And by that I mean that I assume the reader will understand the outcome of something based on how it’s been set up.
Here’s a sort of ridiculous example of what I mean by implicit consequences — I’m in the middle of a sword fight, taking place in the middle of a battle. My opponent is swinging his weapon at me. If I don’t block it, it may strike me. It might hit my left arm, making it more difficult for me to use it to block future attacks. Or it might wound my torso, causing me to bleed and lose energy, making me more susceptible to attack. But if I strike at my opponent, I could leave myself open to counterattack, etc, etc.
I didn’t do that very well, but the point is that many consequences are readily understood without a detailed explanation.
My question is: under what conditions should I be explaining consequences? And under which circumstances do I rely on the obvious?
I’m guessing that it should be explicit when it is something personal, something to do with an MC’s or other POV character’s story arc, something more nuanced. Things like that.
A related question: Is it possible to overdo explaining some consequences? Sort of like in the example above?