Dense Prose or Rich Prose?

[Demesnedenoir]

That would be why I don't watch videos unless it's for a repair on something, LMAO. It stymies my brain how much time people waste on the damned things.

^ This too

I also note how many youtube vids are 10mins when they could say it in 2. Its because of the monetization rules.

 

[Demesnedenoir]

I'm not even sure what you mean... you can pack years into a sentence or pages into a few moments.

The example sentence seems fairly normal to me without context or comparison.

 

[ThinkerX]

I'm not even sure what you mean... you can pack years into a sentence or pages into a few moments.

The example sentence seems fairly normal to me without context or comparison.

I did that in 'Exiles: Pilgrimage.' One of the characters settled down with her toddler in a human village (the only one for thousands of miles), and spent years there living the quiet life as the toddler turned into a preteen. I covered most of that span in a few hundred words.